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schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would love to see what happens next
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I give this story four stars. I am sure you have never had anal. As someone whom has had anal sex and has been raped anally by an ex boyfriend whom had an 8 incher. I want say yes it does hurt if your not relaxed and it can be agony however the anus is ment to stretch. The anus does produce lube. The anus can tear between the vaginal wall and anus especially during childbirth.

Just thought I point it out and yes a good story except for that part.
person Jags
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was hot
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey id like to see where u take this but you need to make it longer, more detailed. It sorta reads like a summary atm, I think if you rewrite it it will be great. I have to admit i thought of a similar scene to this when i read the book but i guess im just a weirdo lol. I hope you continue and/or re write this. Good luck :)
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