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"Bella doesn’t love me. Even if she will always have a part of me, can’t I try and give some part to this girl? She says she is broken, but I am shattered. What a pair. I can’t be fixed, but I can do for her what no one can do for me."

(*rallies the Team Jacob fan girls together to go beat the Bella bitch DOWN*)

I'll return to give you the proper 100+ word review you DESERVE.

this story would be alot more awesome if you updated. At this point my mind has already filled in the blanks and created my own version of the story. Its all down hill after that. please write more?

i dont believe it you updated! That was really good i love this story. you really should update it. I knew when New moon came out everyone would head back to fanfiction. Please keep writing!

Another fabulous chapter! Of course I am still here, your story is way too good to miss! :-)
This chapter was just so romantic and cute. I loved the way he asked her to be his girlfriend but I am also alittle worried about her feeling broken because that means she is going to be more sensitive to when Jacob tells her about Bella, Jacob better keep his promise in fixing her! :-)
Oh please have another yummy scene in the next chapter, because you are right, he won't see her until 7! that's an awful long time to be away from your hmm...I guess I can't say imprint or soulmate yet because I don't what they are! lol. So let's just say it's an awful long time to be away from someone your body craves. :-)
Love this story!!

wow. I don't know but something about a showered Jacob and Lis coming into a restaurant hand in hand seems really hot. lol. Are you going to write a chapter about the shower scene because I would love to read that. lol. Is it just me but what was with Ben? It almost seemed like he was jealous too or something but he is gay so I don't think he would be jealous of Lis and Jacob. I loved how jealous Jacob was. lol. I totally prefer Jacob over Edward any day. There is something so male about him, very masculine and I love how possessive he is of Lis. I love love this story. I can't wait to see how Lis will get when she finds out about Bella because technically she isn't still in love with her ex but if she asks Jacob how he feels about Bella, can she handle him saying that he loves her?? Oh I am very excited about the upcoming chapters!!

Why are there only 30 reviews for this story? I had given up on AFF- took me forever to find quality writing until i accidentally stumbled on this fantastic work! Im spellbound- the characterisation and descriptive language are amazing..i do hope you will continue!

you have to update this story!!! I need to know what happens!

Love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!! So totally hot and your writing style is very unique. I love the story so far cant wait to read more!

That annoying thing poking at Jacob's chest is JEALOUSY! I know you won't say whether they have imprinted but it totally feels like they have. Jacob is obviously jealous of that blonde maggot as he so graciously called him. lol. I like where you are taking this direction, it appears that Lis is going to try to stop herself from getting attached, how will Jacob react? He is possessive of her, will he allow her to put distance between them, to just make it about lust? Somehow I doubt it. I LOVE THIS STORY. Your writing is so hot and intense, I can seriously read about Lis and Jacob for hours! hahaha. So please update soon, real soon! Hugs!

War mal wieder klasse! Thanks for the long Jacob POV those are always the best!