rate_review Reviews

First of all for paying attention to my suggestion. It's soo much easier to read now.

That chapter was awesome. I actually like that you switch views and I'm normally not a fan of that because people tend to do it quite a lot but that is good.

I really like how you describe their 'relationship'.
There's so much passion, so many emotions and especially Jacob doesn't really know how to deal with it.

Their little encounter was rather hot and well written.

Post more soon! :)

I love your story- I like your style and that your are not rushing everything. I hope there coming many new chapters.Please don´t let us wait for too long.

I seriously love it. I like the idea. The train scene was seriously hot. I like your writing style. The only thing I don't really like are the talking parts, I wish you'd put it like that 'bla bla' or "bla bla" so it's easier to tell what's said and what's narrative but other than that I really love it.

Honestly, I had a hard time with the first chapter although I can't quite explain why. Chapter two, however, was a lot more to my liking. You have a very unique writing style (and I mean that in a definitely positive way), so perhaps I simply needed time to get used to it. It makes everything much more mature and intense which is amazing.
I'd love to see more of your ideas in the future, though... :)

I am in love with this.

Seriously could anything be hotter?