rate_review Reviews

Why do I get the feeling the next chapter is going to involve a highly pissed off Leah (more pissed off than usual that is)? I hope we get to see her go all hormonal pregnant bitch on the Makah's ass's. Cant wait for the next chapter!

I have to say that chapter was so cute, and I loved how you had Nessie ask all those quetions to Leah too. This chapter was great, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. Also I think that Leah desirves some happiness in her life, and if Embry wants to marry her I say let her go for it. I hope you update soon, and I hope you enjoy the next Harry Potter movie tonight.

Actually Edward was born early 20th Century...early 19th century would be the 1800s :D

This chapter is really good, and I love how you got everyone in the meeting react like that to the news of the secert from Old Quil himself. It was sad how you ended the chapter with Old Quil having cancer, but I think that it would be naural to have something like that. I hope you update soon, and the story is getting really good so far.

That was really good, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. Everything was really good how you got Embry and Leah to go out to dinner and kick the ass off of the three guys in the story. Now I loved how you made Sue all motherly like when she wanted to take Leah's and Embry's picture like that when they were about to leave to go on their first date. I hope you update real soon, and can't wait to see what happens in the meeting/finding out who Embry's real father is.

That was so cute, and yet the story was really good. I loved how you got Leah to tell Embry what she was doing with his hair sample, and how Sam and Jake told Billy to make the meeting with the elders. I hope you update soon, because it's getting really good so far in the story.

This was so good, and I loved how you got all of them to see the baby in the video. I also like the way you had Quil's gradfather remember his past in the story. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, and I hope you update soon because it's getting really good so far.

The plot is beginning to thicken, and it is becoming addictingly delicious! I cannot remember all of the things in the books, but if the Makahs were not in the books, I applaude you. That is a very ingenious addition to the story without getting too predictable or feeling like it was just thrown in hap-hazardly. Keep up the good wrting. Again, I envy your story wrting skills. Once I get to a certain place, I stop, not knowing where to go. I actually have you in my profile as a suggested author! Do you think, if it isn't too much trouble, that you could look through one of my stories, The Eye of the Beholder, and see where you see things going? I would really appreciate your advice and experience. If you are not able to, I understand.

GREAT STORY! KEEP IT UP!

~ Aldys Annabel Clairveux })j({

This is getting so good, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. I hope Quil tells them about what Sam and his grandfather talked about, just because it's really important to know those things. Also I really like how you have Alice forseeing what would happen to Leah; it is so cute and I'm glad you have Alice telling Leah what's going to happen to her. Great job with the story so far, and I hope you update real soon.

I'm glad that Leah is okay, and that she knows the sex of the baby is the fact that it's a girl. The way you had Sam find out about the other side of the story about the other wolf clan was really good. Also how you had Quil over hear their conversation was really well put together as well. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, it's getting really good so far and I hope you update real soon.