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Wahoo - another chapter! Granted, I really shouldnt be reading it because I have a bio exam in two days, but still - somethings in life are just more important and good fanfiction is one of them!
Every day I love Leah more and more and by the end of the story, I hope she has kicked some major ass and shown everyone who is boss.
Lol, I love Nessie's views on 'Conception and the birth process'
Can't wait for the next chapter (though maybe I shouldnt look for updates until after my exam lol)

Another WOW! And GRRR!!! You stopped right when it was getting good... a cliffhanger, if you will. MORE MORE MORE! I was hoping the... um... "interaction" between Embry and LEah would have been more detailed, but one doesn't have to do that unless they want to. Embry's reaction to it, though, was very genuine and true, I think. Keep writing!

It was so cute at first with Embry and Leah trying to make out, until it got really ugly when Seth came into the room and saw what they did. You did a really good job with this chapter; I hope Leah is okay, it would suck if something happens to her baby and I hope Quil finds out what his grandfather and Sam are talking about. Which is why I can't wait to see what happens next in this story it's getting really good so far. Also I didn't see any spelling/grammer errors which is great, also I hope you update soon, and I wish you luck for the twilight awards thing or whatever it's called that you're going to do.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You cant just leave me hanging like that!!!!! update SOON!

That was really cute how you got the Cullens and Jake's pack to play baseball with each other. It even got better how you had Embry and Leah making love to each other, and how you got him to react the way he did was priceless. I hope you update real soon because it's getting really good, and also you might need to reread it just to see if there is any spelling/grammer errors in it.

Bwahaha, Leah pulling out clumps of their hair? Awesome! Laughed like a nut. I love this story so much - I swear I check everyday for updates. I cant wait for more - and to see what happens with Leah and Embry.

I loved this chapter, and I can't wait to see how this turns out for Leah. I thought it was funny that you got Leah to pull out the hairs of Jake, Quil, and Embry. I hope you update soon, because this story is getting really good so far.

I really loved this chapter, and it was cool how you got Leah to punch Sam. Also keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I love this chapter, and I'm glad that you're going to have Leah and Sam just talk it sounds like a good idea. Also I loved how you're not going to let Sam off the hook that easily; he really needs to suffor a little more. Anyway I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, and I hope you can update as soon as you can.

I love this chapter, and the face that Sam did was priceless when Leah said that to his face. All I got to say is you go girl, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story.