rate_review Reviews

More PLEASE! I'm getting very eager to know more of the story! I don't know what else to tell you at the moment, but I know that you're story is ROCKING OUT! Again, very developed story line that keeps the reader intrigued and wanting to read MORE!

your story is so great

This chapter was great, and I loved how you got Embry to have a hobby in the story. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, and continue doing what you love doing.

WOW... I have just read all of the chapters of your story, and it is amazing. I feel like I have started reading the La Push version of the Twilight series... I feel like it is that good! The writing style is very smooth, allowing the characters to come in very naturally in different places with actions and reactions true to their characters. The story line is coming along very well and, again, very smoothly, with great plot twists that don't feel out of place. And the way you have everything tied in together? Nearly flawless! The explanations for certain aspects of your story are very well thought out and, again, could possibly be seen in the "La Push Twilight" books. In the nearly 10 years I've been writing fan fics (published on this site or not), I don't think I have ever dreamed of thinking of a plot that didn't sound like a Mary Jane character plopped into the middle of the story. Despite some technical errors (grammar, punctuation, spelling), this story is unfolding beautifully, and I cannot wait to read more!

the vampire,
Aldys })j({

OMG That chapter left me speachless for like a whole two minutes!
This is a great story. I hope you keep it up.

This was a great chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next in this story. Also I can't believe that you had Sam call Leah a bitter bitch; to be honest yeah sure she maybe bitter, but she didn't really needed to be called a bitch. Even though in the Twilight Saga she maybe bitter of what Sam put her through; which I like how you did this story after Breaking Dawn, and how she's finally acting like a normal person (well at least a normal person can get in Twilight). I hope you get a chapter in real soon, and I hope you have a good summer.

I've been following this for a while to see where it would and i honestly enjoy it so far. I think its really, really good. Keep up the great work!!!
ReddTwilight

I am glad that someone is giving some time to Leah. She is an awesome character, and I feel more of her life needed to be told.

I love the story, and can't wait to see the next chapter.

Nooooooo!!!!!!!! You evil, evil person! I hate cliffhangers! Please please update soon! Please!
As you can tell, I still love the story - I cant wait for the rest

OMG!!!!! I hate clifhangers!!!!!! But I love your fic!!!!! I have a theory about Leah and Embry. Are they imprints and the pregnancy kinda puts it on hold????? Don't tell me, I wanna be surprised by the story but its a good idea, right??!! It's could be a good idea for the plot. What do you think?

Peace
moongirl

P.S. When's your next update???!!!!! :)