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very good!
I cant wait for the next chapter.
The protecivness is a great twist. I think in the wild (real wolves) the other pack would feel treatened and possible be a treat to the cubs. I know that a male lion will kill the cubs of a female if they are from another litter....
The next chapters should be very interesting.

hey thanks for the update. I loved it. I cant wait till Leah tells Sam tho. I wish we could see Bella in this tho, and Reneesme cos of any of the charcters she know exactly how Leah feels. And it'd be good if Rose and Emmett were in there too, cos im sure Rose would be all ga ga over Leah just because shes pregnant even if she is a wolf. But all in all very good chapter i espically liked Leah's idea of being on a throne worshiped by a dozen men!

wow this story was so good i literaly just shat myself instead of get up and use the water closet and interupt reading it! im sitting in filled pants as i write this, and its a tribute too how good u are!

thank you for the update. i hope the next chapter she tells sam and emily but i guess ill have to wait and see. please update again soon.

hey im really liking this stroy i hope you continue

hey. i love that last line on the second chapter. 'we're going to see doctor sparkles'. doctor fang would have worked too, but doctor sparkles works better coming from leah. keep going with this story, please!