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November 2, 2021 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I love this take on Jasper's Outlook. How do I put you on alert?
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The two latest chapters were great and the character interaction was too, of course, everything was well written, apart from a few typos (again nothing major, mostly rather mindless, but unfortunately noticeable, I’m afraid, sorry!). Maybe you should get a beta reader to help you out a little, just a tip, that’s all! Hope you don’t take offence!
Anyway, the smut at the end of chapter five; was very nicely described, awe, poor Jasper, what will he do?! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…
Anyway, the smut at the end of chapter five; was very nicely described, awe, poor Jasper, what will he do?! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Send an email of the story to tico_wannabe@yahoo.com. We'll talk more there make sure though to tell me in the label that your the author of Southern Comfort
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August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Erm . . . I see the author's note, but no chapter - and you have me hooked!
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hon, I love your story and I can't wait to see more, but you either need to reupload chapter five, the website is screwing up, or My computer is just spazzing because all I see in chapter five is your authors note. :\
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August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears* our southern boy finally found Alice. I love this and actually you're doing good with the grammer and if you need someone to read over this and help with grammer just holler at me. I've beta'd for others so I can help. So happy to meet someone from Texas as well.
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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I like this story please keep going and the typos weren't too bad. Can't wait to see more of Jasper course I'm bais being from Texas and all. :)
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August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story you’ve here, I quite like it, so far! The plot’s great and so is the character portrayal and character interaction, too of course and everything is well written, apart from a few typos, oh, well, nothing too much so no worries, eh!
Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…
Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I have been getting into Jasper's character lately, and I think out of all the stories we get in Twilight of the vampires' pasts, Jasper's intrigues me the most. I love to see a fanfic finally delving into it!
The typos are noticeable but nevertheless good writing, you keep it exciting. I can't wait to see how this turns into a Jasper/Bella fanfic! Interesting pairing...please continue!!
The typos are noticeable but nevertheless good writing, you keep it exciting. I can't wait to see how this turns into a Jasper/Bella fanfic! Interesting pairing...please continue!!
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking how this is coming along and am glad you finally updated! I've never seen a story that goes so much into Jasper's past, so I think it's very cool! Keep up the good work, and post sooner!