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i like this. there are things i would have done different but over all i like the story and can't wait to see what happens next xx

A "little bun in the oven" (so sweet!), an excited Rosalie (scary...), and the Volturi on their way. Honestly, mix all that together and you'll realize why I'm jumping up and down, waiting impatiently for the next chapter. ;)

However, I want you to take your time. I'm very sorry about your grandfather, hun. :( I hope you'll get as well as possible through everything, from your loss to your new job.
Don't feel sorry for "neglecting" us. We can wait. I don't want you to feel bad about us when you've got so much on your mind, alright? :)

*bottles up the motivation and hands it over* Oh my, I so love your portrayal of Jacob... and that coming from someone who normally can live rather well without Jake means quite something, believe me.
So take the motivation, shower yourself in it (cuz I definitely won't shower you in reviews myself as that's probably unsanitary... you never know where a review has been before... yuck) and post the next chapter before I fall into some kind of depression. ;)

You're creepy anyway. *lol* However, I demand my free coupon(s) for bottled air. If I don't get it soon enough, I'll send Charlie over (and we all know that we must spare his heart after this chapter). Because he's the chief and he's got the badge and the authority and... you know... ^_^

its a good chapter. I cant wait until jacob sees what embry thinks about bella. i think thats going to be funny.

HAHAHA! I love that last chapter!! That was hilarious!!! I actually didn't mind that your wrote in his point of view at all. Before this chapter I thought he was kidding about being all flirty with her..and I thought it was hilarious when I found out he was into her a bit. I hope you update soon!

Please update soon. This is getting more and more interesting by the chapter. LOL Please update super soon!

I love this story! I love Embry's POV. Please write more soon!

This story just keeps getting better and better… I honestly love it. Can anyone imagine Mike drunk and with a hangover without laughing hysterically?? *lol*

And a chapter from Embry’s POV? Why not, sounds good! :)

Thanks for the "steamy smutty action" - wow, that was... well, steamy and smutty indeed. Hehe. Hope you won't get any other writer's block which might stand between Bella, Jake and more smutty action. ;)

You're too funny. I LOVE your review suggestions (especially adoring the stalker thingy)! *lol*

Can someone please kill Billy? He just destroyed a very promising smut scene and I’m NOT amused about it. *sulks* Men… >.<
Otherwise: oho, imprinting? Can’t wait for next chapter!