rate_review Reviews

Hey hey!! Loving the story so far, one of the few that actually appeals to me, though I was surprised that it did.
I like Bella's character, can't wait to see more of Jacob!! And of course an angry, sexy Edward. (Sigh) Isn't fiction wonderful?

Really, really loving it, please update sooooon!!

xxx
Aera

Oho, his bedroom. *lol* Now this could be fun in the next chapter. Hehe.
Finally, no cliffhanger to give me a heart attack. Thx, hun. ;)

Go team Jacob! I love this fic!

Good Lord, you and your cliffhangers… I almost got a heart attack myself when Bella grabbed her pyjamas, then I almost got another one at the end of this chapter. Honestly, do you want to kill off your loyal readers?? *lol* I won’t be able to review and rate if you keep me jumping up and down with fright… ;P
Otherwise, I just love it. I really enjoyed the suffering side of Edward (mean, I know, but I like the dark and depressing stuff) and the breaking of his unbeating heart. Hehe.
So here’s a big bouquet of happiness for you. Now go and do brainstorming and get new ideas… hint hint… ;)

And please don’t stop the cliffhangers – they are great! I’ll try to be braver next time, I swear…

this is pretty good. Thank you sooooooo much for realizing that bellas and edwards realtionship was tainted. i hated that she went back to him like he never left. It sickened me like nothing else. I hated the story after that. but i am so happy that im not the only one that recognizes that the story was seriously flawed. i love jacob and stephanie screwed him over in the books! i love the story. please keep writing

SQUEEEEEEEE!!!!!! i cant wait to read some smutty action! At least thats that i hope is going to happen. I love the story so much and i already described to you why in my last review. i cant wait to read more!

I am looking forward to another update. Although it's tough for me. I am a big fan of Edward and a big fan of Jacob, so I am torn. But I enjoy reading your story! So please update soon!

I would say wonderful... if it hadn't been for Bella breaking Edward's heart. Still, that chapter was just wonderful. Sorry, Edward. ;) Your story's a pleasure to read.

I really like it so far although normally I’m no big Jacob fan. And I really enjoy when titles get explained in the story (even if it’s just once or a small hint to it).
Please continue. I don’t think it started out slow. It was just right. :)