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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! You know them so well. I would love to read more from you.
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a wonderful job of portraying these characters. It's not always well done, but this was beautiful! Felt very much like it could have actually been in Eclipse. Lovely!
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just pointing out a spelling error :) You accidentally called Alice "Alive" instead in the second chapter.
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really really enjoyed this, I think you very successfully captured Jacob's thoughts during this interaction. I tell you what, it'd be awesome to see the same scene from Edward's perspective, what you think?? ;-) and the idea about what Bella says when sleep talking would be genius!
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very well written. I'm not gonna lie, i would love it of you did the whole book like this :)
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and just wanted to let you know it's great. I've only read the first part so far but I couldn't wait to let you know how much I love it. You've kept true to the characters and the scene and I appreciate it.
Thanks for sharing,
H
Thanks for sharing,
H
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the way this tied in with the book, it made a lot of sense. I would really have loved to have heard what Bella had said during her sleep talking that night, or any other conversations Jacob and Edward had while she was sleeping- that would have been interesting.
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I’ve already read a few tent versions, but this one was the best by far. You managed to capture everyone’s feelings and worries so well which is quite some task when it comes to moments between Edward and Jacob. And is it just me, or did it actually get hotter in this tent? ;)
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written!
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another well written continuation of the conversation, very very good. I am enjoying this story very much, it's awesome. I hope we'll be seeing some smut soon...prehaps?
Keep it up!
DeeLish xx
Keep it up!
DeeLish xx