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=D I like this start! Jake's speech is so moving and sweet...and true, when you think about it.

xDD Jacob's joy over getting the burgers to himself cracks me up!

poor Bella...and sweet Jacob. =D love Jake!

xDDD Bert who smells like cheese! LOL!

Aww, Jake. he wants to go with Bells, he just won't admit it. cute!

The pow wow sounds cool!

I love the way you describe Jacob's wild wolf eyes. And I love how instead of letting Bella rule him and step all over him like she does in he books, he finally has some backbone. good for him!

oh hottie Jacob...:p

since mud pies! xD cute!

I LOVE IT!

I just found this site. I've been working on a story of my own because I've been online for days looking for "Jacob Black erotic fiction" and have been deeply disappointed in what I found. So, this is my first review, ever. Anyway, I loved it! It's exactly what I was looking for. I love how it ties in to the real Twilight books. You really found a way to make it realistic, like it could have happened in the books. I hope you write more. The only thing that didn't make sense to me was how easily Jacob took to Bella, sexually. I would have figured there would be some kind of hesitation. But then again, he's a wolf. :) Great story!!

Fantastic chapter! It seems like it's been forever since an update. And Jake going all wolfie would be HOT! Yum! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Gotta love a good Jake story! Loved it.

I still haven't seen either movie or read the books, but this is a great fic. The movie previews have made me like Jake so far.

I enjoyed the pace of this story, and Jake's logic about vampires and how associating with them was ruining Bella's life bits and pieces at a time. He did it without implying that he thought any less of her and without handing her a big pile of I told you so's. You've made him sensitive and insightful, good qualities to see in a male character. Is there more?