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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! NEEDS SOME SMUT!!! This is ADULT FANFICTION afterall. lol. But otherwise it's fantastic!
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AW!! Jacob seems scared to feel for her again....she should totally go to the pow wow....after all, Jacob WANTS her to...you can tell...heeheeheehee!! Great job on this story so far, and I REALLY loved the reasons that Jacob gave to Bella in the first chapter, on why NOT to become the undead....they were sooooo true and really gives you something to think about when romanticizing vampires too much.....
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wolves in the backyard for safety and big pow-wow instead of a prom (now honestly, isn't every prom but a big pow-wow??)? Yummy!
But... Bert?? That guy sounds like some big fluffy monster from some children's TV series. *lol* Hope Bella will decide to leave Bert be and dedicate her attention fully on Jacob (if you know what I mean...). ;)
But... Bert?? That guy sounds like some big fluffy monster from some children's TV series. *lol* Hope Bella will decide to leave Bert be and dedicate her attention fully on Jacob (if you know what I mean...). ;)
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story! thanks for sharing <3~ please don't abandon this story
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That cliffy was just evil now. What on Earth is Jacob thinking? Update very soon. Gah! Come on now, you know you want to tell us what he's thinking. Pretty please.
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU GOD IN HEAVEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! someone who finally realizes what an idiot bella was being about the whole thing. Man thats exactly why i hated the books. thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this. people need to understand the truth.
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting little story so far, i do hope you update this soon...and longer chapters would be fab!!!
DeeLish xx
DeeLish xx
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo i like. i like alot
its good how your making jake seem at least a little reluctant and not just jumping straight into the
'oh bella, now your back from leaving me for months i love you and ill forget all the shit thats happened'
:D
its good how your making jake seem at least a little reluctant and not just jumping straight into the
'oh bella, now your back from leaving me for months i love you and ill forget all the shit thats happened'
:D
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sure I will love this as soon as Jecob forgives Bella....so update soon please?
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nicely done i'm waiting for more =3