rate_review Reviews

Really glad you continued on this story. It's a pleasure to be torn between hating and pitying your version of Edward. I can see his point, even if he's terribly stubborn and unregretting. Well done!

wow. now i want to kill edward. thank you for writing this story.

Aw man, I so was not expecting Edward to be such a JERK!!
Don't worry Bella, you can go and meet Jacob at La Push! Don't kill yourself!!

Hello. First review I've ever done. No story has ever evoked an emotional response before. Here goes:Wow. Beautiful beginning painful ending I was so not expecting. All I could think was God I hope Jacob, or anyone from the wolf pack, sees Bella and rescues her, while Charlie goes for his gun and Edwards' hide. Thanks again.

Nice job honest. No sarcasm thank you again.

Would have never expected to see a story with Edward being such an asshole. ;) I know this is supposed to be an one-shot, but don't you think there's a chance of making more of it? There surely is potential for further ideas (which, hopefully, could include doing ugly things to evil Edward... hehe) and I'd love to see what else is up your sleeve.
Apart from the language of your characters being a bit weird at times, it was quite some pleasure to read. :)