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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Someone call an ambulance. +_+ What you're doing to Veronica makes me feel rather sorry for her, but at the same time she's also kinda creepy. Like something you can't figure out and that may strike any moment. I dunno if that's actually your intention, but I like it a lot anyway. :)
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord, you definitely know how to torture your readers... *lol* Still no hint about V's true being (and honestly, I have no idea what/who she could be), but I enjoyed reading it anyway. ;)
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June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alot of spelling and grammar errors in this chap. You need a beta
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're writing in a very suspenseful way... can't wait to find out what V actually is. Please more! :)
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! Oh my britney! what the freak is this girl?!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like this idea. i can't wait to find out what the deal with veronica is.
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, well written. Kinda miffed that bella and jacob arent friends. I take it reneesme isint going to be popping up? Lol this is the first fic where the writer says 'whisper shout', update soon!