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by LadyNarayamaan

person Anon
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Insanely poetic, and utterly enthralling.
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*bows to her goddess* Thanks for the dedication… I honestly feel flattered. :)

I could start this review, going on forever with how much I adored this story, but let me sum it up with one word: BRILLIANT.
Simply the idea to change between Edward’s and the moon’s POV (now honestly, when has anyone ever written something like that??) stunned me to no end. Of course I have to suppress my blind jealousy over your incredible talent and way with words, but hey… at least I’m honest about it! *lol*

Zee End of zee review (*lol* I love you, girl… you’re just so funny and smart!)


P.S.: If this is all you’ll ever do to Edward, then I agree on sharing him with you. Anything further and I’ll call my lawyer along with chaining Edward up to the wall, understood? You’ve got your little wolf boy to play with anyway… ;P
person chesterzerousygirl
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was poeticly hot. definately want more and i would like to know when you update.
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definitely worth writing a glowing review over! I love how the moon in the story is a spectator, how it practically lusts after the vision Edward is creating. It makes us as the reader imagine ourselves draping over his skin, watching his act unnoticed. Very wonderful indeed.
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