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I enjoyed your story immensely. I love that it's not a usual "fuck fuck and a bit more of a detailed fuck" story xD It's not fun. Well, not for me. Your story was a perfect mix of action and smut. I thought that I might be skipping the action parts but to be honest I was waiting for them! :) All the love scenes where Edward and Bella experimented with each other, were very nicely written. If I was to complain about anything I would say that the first encounters could have been more detailed. But it's just me I guess :D You know what's the best about this story? That it has a continuation! So happy about it :D Right now I'm gonna start reading it :) I'll review it after reading. See you then :D

Please continue!!! It's awesome!!!

I just love this story! It has the right combination of adventure, fluff, and lemons I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story.

Please please please continue this. All the obnoxious implications are resolved in your writing, and I think you could weave the honeymoon into a heart wrenching work of art. I practically take your stories as the truth of what happened between the gaps, and I'm DYING to read about the burst pillows. So again, pleasepleaseplease continue!!!

I would like to see an epilogue with the details of the wedding itself, and of course maybe a one-shot of the wedding night, like you did for their 'practicing'. I also just want to say that you've improved your writing skills greatly since the beggining of this story, in my opinion. It went from feeling like I was reading a regular, albeit talented, fanfic writer, to having more of the feel of reading a true author. I'm terribly sorry I didn't get the chance to review more regularly, but I eagerly awaiting each update. Thank you for telling a beautiful story!

p.s.- I also absolutely loved your lil telling of their 'practice', I seriously almost raped my man that night! LOL! (disclaimer-I do not participate in, nor do I condone rape...but it's fun to think about sometimes!)

I love this story! I find it hilarious that Edward was getting a little case of cold feet somewhat. That was funny about what Emmett was doing. Great job with the chapter! Hope your vacation is going well and can't wait to see the next chapter!

This story is so amazingly true to the original text's that when I read the books, I get events from your story confused with the real ones. You're awesome...PleasePleasePLEASE finish this!

I love the frustrated "Oh, for the love of all that is Holy!" Poor Edward, not to mention poor Jas and Em when he finds out about their trip. Ooo, can't wait!

Um, I'm confused. In Ch. 8 Emmett ripped Valentino's head from his body as Valentino had talked badly about Bella. So how is he alive again in Ch. 10?

I LOVE Ch 12's ending of how Edward would most certainly climb through her bedroom window anyway!