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for Prelude

by belladonnacullen

person KathrynH
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Alice, no wonder she's an overamped pixie, it's all the dang stress!
person KathrynH
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kinda hard to believe this hasn't gotten more hits. I know I'm definitely enjoying it! Can't wait to read what happens in the desert. Cullens gotta kick ass!
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. I have just melted! I was internally screaming for Bella to not tell him to wait! Love it! Update with and Edward and Bella chapter soon please! xxxx
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...the hot and steamy bits are amazing....The Arabian nights chapter nearly had me chewing my fist with the sexual tension....i loved the bit against the window especially.
Love it, please continue! (especially the Edward/Bella Chapters!)
xx
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far....I think you have Edward's perspective down to a T. Ive written a story on here but am too scared to write anything from his POV, as I know i wont do it as well as you have done!
P.s loving the steamy bits!
XXX
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
come on... just say it: you are Stephanie Meyer arent ya?
AWESOME!!! this is my second review cuz my first one apparently got lost somewhere LOL, but you fic has the best characterization i've ever read. And i read a LOT xD! I luv you story OMG OMG!! I am you FAN !!! there are fanfics out there with warm vampiric edwards.. and weird stuff like that ¬¬' , but OMG you did perfect on this fic, please keep up the WONDERFULL work!!!!!!!!
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