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October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have the full set of these books, the word for sleep is Slytha
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The word for sleep in the ancient language is slytha
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can’t believe that no one has reviewed this amazing story before, oh, well; I’ll be first then, yay, laughs! Anyway, I really liked it, the plot’s great and the character portrayal was too, as well, as the character interaction, especially Eragon/Murtagh, very much in character, I believe, kudos!
The story itself was also quite well written, but it could have been better, because I spotted quite a few typos, such as; grammar ones and spelling mistakes, you should always re-read what you’ve written before posting it, and as spell-checks can be a life saver, they can also fuck everything up, so a beta reader is probably one of the best way to go, just a tip for the future! Otherwise, I really liked how you composed everything, the atmosphere was great, the dialogs were awesome and the sex scene was hot and very nicely done as well, as described!
The ending was perfect, even though Eragon kind of don’t remember anything about what happen in that particular clearing in the Spine, but it actually makes way for a sequel, don’t ya think, pretty please?! For example; Eragon starts to remember what happened and the aftermath and consequences of it all, just an idea?! Anyway, I’d love for you to write one follow-up, as may have already figured out and if you do; I’d be sure to read it! Thanks for sharing!
The story itself was also quite well written, but it could have been better, because I spotted quite a few typos, such as; grammar ones and spelling mistakes, you should always re-read what you’ve written before posting it, and as spell-checks can be a life saver, they can also fuck everything up, so a beta reader is probably one of the best way to go, just a tip for the future! Otherwise, I really liked how you composed everything, the atmosphere was great, the dialogs were awesome and the sex scene was hot and very nicely done as well, as described!
The ending was perfect, even though Eragon kind of don’t remember anything about what happen in that particular clearing in the Spine, but it actually makes way for a sequel, don’t ya think, pretty please?! For example; Eragon starts to remember what happened and the aftermath and consequences of it all, just an idea?! Anyway, I’d love for you to write one follow-up, as may have already figured out and if you do; I’d be sure to read it! Thanks for sharing!