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for Sea, Foam and Dust

by Hnoss

person Tahn
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please please keep writing this. I wanna know what happens.
person MrsEmmettCullen
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing this story...i'm desperate to find out what happens next. it's a beautiful story so far...i would really love to see where it goes...please and thank you!!!!!
person adam nash
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah! where's the rest of the story?!
So beautifully written. So seductive and magical i couldn't stop! i dearly hope to read the rest. To find out what happens next to Coeur, to see his next encounter with prince Andrew, to find out what his malicious older brother and his father have in store.
I'm in love with this story, and would love to illustrate it...
How amazing. Please feel free to contact me at tigernash@hotmail.com and keep me informed on this story's progression.

Adam C. Nash
Mt Eliza, Victoria, Australia.
person sara
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
although this is pretty much the little mermaid, i like it alot. i think its cute but more detail and storyline would make it better. i like how this is pretty much disney gone gay lol
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooh please keep writing this story... I keep checkin back for more!
person Lucia
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting! I love that it's sort of a genderbent version of The Little Mermaid with a few twists here and there. :) Very nice, my dear! I hope you continue with this story. From the way you've described the characters, I really like their designs! It makes me itch to draw them. ;) (If I end up doing so, I'll be sure to post back here with a link. :) )
Never stop writing, you're a wonderful storyteller!
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
look i will not, i repeat will not be another besotted reader who debases themselves in the hope that you will update SOON... however pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee finish BEAST,the narnia fairy tale and this!!!!!
you are without doubt the first author who just doesn't suck when revamping fairy tales or doing what A Rice did with sleeping beauty. shiit i went on a tangent, basically you rock u fairy tale god so get writing! NOW!!
person Lindsay
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually fangirling the Sea-Witch...Warlock. I hope you finish the story. I laughed aloud at the very end of Chapter Three.
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
....A rock......**face palm*
person kristina
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, I cant believe it hasn't gotten any other reviews yet! You should post this in Y Gallery, I think it gets more traffic than this website, and they actually have a section for fairy tale spinoffs called Cracked Fairy Tales. Hope you write more!
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