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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Tough material (which is exactly to my liking) and very promising for future chapters. Alright, perhaps not that promising for Jacob who will by now have all of the Cullens hunting him, but could I care any less? Hehe. It's his own fault... ;)
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 2! CHAPTER 2! CHAPTER 2! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Just like you to know that i like your story, but it might be a good idea to think about it a little more and put some more detail in it. I know that you need to grow as a writer when you write but this story has so much potential you have such a fantastic start!
keep on the good work and update soon!
Just like you to know that i like your story, but it might be a good idea to think about it a little more and put some more detail in it. I know that you need to grow as a writer when you write but this story has so much potential you have such a fantastic start!
keep on the good work and update soon!
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is not a celebration, it is a time of mourning.
I want to see how the others will react.
So, Please update soon.
I want to see how the others will react.
So, Please update soon.
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good start to what i hope will be a great story. I hope that you continue this:too many good writters have left good stories unfinished; which is a shame for everyone.
Hope to read more from you soon.
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DreamWritter
Hope to read more from you soon.
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DreamWritter
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can imagine that most people would be put off by this story...oh how they detest the word 'rape'. But i read this out of pure interest, and friend....consider it piqued. I love any Twilight story that doesn't follow the usual Bella/Jacob/Edward/OC drivel, i like something a little different.
I will follow this sotry with great interest, i do hope you continue on with it.
DeeLish
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I will follow this sotry with great interest, i do hope you continue on with it.
DeeLish
xXx
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, can't wait for more chapters. Especially ones with Edward's reaction when he finds out. cant wait for more chapters
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Wow! Update!
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa! *definately* want to see how this turns out! great first chapter!
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon.
I would really enjoy some blood and gore.... I wonder what Edward's method of torture will be.
Btw: It's going to take years for Bella to recover mentally, and physically.... Will she still be able to bear children?
Please update soon, this is really interesting!
I would really enjoy some blood and gore.... I wonder what Edward's method of torture will be.
Btw: It's going to take years for Bella to recover mentally, and physically.... Will she still be able to bear children?
Please update soon, this is really interesting!