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I really enjoyed this story. If you do extendi'll see, I think it might be interesting to bring alice back for a bit. Anyway, again great story

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you know... i really don't like twilight, but i love your story. Maybe because there's not a ridiculous main character with no flesh or back bone. -hugs- and i would love to read more if you were to think about writing a sequel. :3 And I've loved it so much the firs time, that i've read it a few more times XD

They're coming to take me away HA! HA! jk couldn't help myself. I'm sad to see it end, but I'm glad to see a happy ending from you :). The flower scene was very well written...not really much to add. Good luck with your future stories, and glad the squirrel could be of use.

I LOVE it! I'm such a sucker for happy endings! :D Oh and incredibly hot and romantic for a last chapter (love the bike)! I love Jasper and Whitaker. You've truly created a wonderful character and couple. This is my favorite Twilight OC stories I've ever read. Great job! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work in the future (especially "I See"). Congrats on finishing such a wonderful fic! Keep up the great work!

awww it's over! :( It was good i can't wait to read other once that you write!

i'm not particularly fond of twilight, but my friend recommended it.
i have to say that i do like it and i hope that you write more/ finish it up. :3

Yay, you posted! I enjoyed it as always. I kinda forgot about the flowers in the clearing honestly, but it's been a while since I read that chapter. I hate to see this end, but all things must. I hope to start writing more of my fic soon. RL does have a way of causing delays. And unfortunately, I'm not as good at updating like you are. Can't wait to see how this story ends (especially since the danger appears to be over) and how the flowers are involved. Great job as always! :) One more to go!

I hope rl isn't treating you too badly. Comparing this to Music, I've noticed something. Overall, your writing has become brighter. Things are starting to work out instead of being constantly foiled. I do have one small criticism. Whitaker is becoming a bit too perfect. Even though he's a pure character, his constant kindness is removing a lot of his depth. I don't think it's going to ruin the story, but in your future stories, if you have a character like him, be sure to include a few flaws. I really liked this chapter. The fanatic amuses me. Peace. ;)

You haven't forgotten about us and Whitaker, have you? Hope all is well with you! I know RL can be a pain. :) I'll keep checking each day for a new chapter.