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Wow, this time you actually posted the new chapter just as I was reviewing another story. Perfect timing! ;)

Did anyone else notice that Carlisle ALWAYS has to kinda clear up the mess his "kids" leave behind?? Poor Carlisle. :( If I were him, I'd definitely punish them, vampire or not. Hehe.

But again, how you can you leave us with such a cliffhanger?? This chapter was EXTREMELY good, I dunno why. I guess it had just everything in it, from the wolves to the blood and changing. I've read the Prologue, so I knew this would happen sooner or later, but I wasn't prepared for it happening now. It's lovely (if that's the right word to describe it...)! :)

I was wondering with the wolves would show up, and that was an unexpected way to change Whitaker or at least to begin the change. Whitaker's love is amazing. I understand he's been through a lot so he's used to pain, but the amount of will power he has to ignore pain is outstanding. He's actually starting to become a role-model for me, which is weird since I didn't like him too much at the beginning of the story.

It happened about the same way as I thought it would though. Bella is going to want to join them though i mean "if Whitaker can be a vampire why can't i?!" The next question would be if Jasper wants him to be a vampire.

Nice twist. Did not see that one coming at all. Your writing has so many twists and turns, I can hardly keep up with it. Maybe I'm just slow. Congratulations on another great update!

Well that doesn't help with the trust issue. Can Jasper get over what he did and how long will that take? Guilt and self resentment can be powerful things. I can almost see Jasper staying away for a while and Whitaker having to convince him to come back. Interesting twist.

Rough chapter, but I certainly don't hate you for it, hun! Stories are like kids... you can show and tell them what you want them to do, but in the end they'll be happy to ignore you and find their own way. ;) So far, however, I really like how it developes.

I was a bit surprised about Whitaker going into this when Jasper was warning him to not get any closer, though. Could it be that Whitaker is Bella's secret brother?? A magnet for danger?? *lol*

I thoroughly enjoy this story. Update soon please

"Can someone say…Necrophiliac?" and "I’d offer you something, but I’m fresh out of live venison." were my most favorite lines. They made me grin to no end. ;)

I like how Jasper's coming-out happened. It was so calm. I was afraid Whitaker could get hysteric or something, but I'm really happy that it worked out so well. Plus, they may get on with the smut soon which is great... hehe.

Don't worry, the panic attack from the othe chapter was just fine. Actually, I even found it rather realistic. :)

Humm, so the secret is out. He took it better than I thought he would but then love can do that to you. Wonder how the others will take it, especially Rosalie.

Wow, Whitaker is very understanding. I expected more emotion from him, but I guess after all he's been through, it makes sense. I like how the angst was lifted with a happier note at the end. Great story so far, I'm curious to see how it's going to end.