rate_review Reviews

I like it but i still think Music is better. This one seems more distant. It's not the right word but it's the best I can think up of. Don't get me wrong I always look forward to your updates and it's a good story.

Well ty for the review of my story. Lol, I told you I was inspired and i'm like in love with Jasper. Keep it up, I like where you're going with this story. The chapters are a smidge short, but you're super quick with updates so it makes up for it, lol. Keep it up!

Oh my, you're so busy with posting new chapters. Makes me feel ashamed since I still haven't posted my first chapter... I'm so lazy these days. And it's not completely done yet, either, which is a good excuse. o_O

"like the wall that was Emmett." *lol* Yes, that must be a fitting description.
And... wow, Edward really had some humor in this chapter. Hehe.

I can relate to Whitaker looking for his already dead grandfather. Even months after gran's death, mom would catch herself wanting to call her when there was some news. It's hard to get that out of your system, and it certainly takes time. I think you wrote that part very well. It seemed so real, I kinda felt a lump in my throat...
Of course, the little slash smut was nice, too. :)

Don't worry about me, I LOVE drama and angsty stuff. ^_^ And about the Emmet story... whoa, you're really asking ME for my humble input? O.O Uhm, I'd say the OC should be female cuz in my eyes, Emmett's just not the slash guy. I could be wrong, though. I've always had this kind of fantasy that if Emmett ever came across an OC, it'd probably be during playing some sport, like at school. Dunno why. Otherwise, I'm afraid I'm no big help for great ideas. Sorry. ;)

OH YAY AN UPDATE!!! ME SO HAPPY! Lol, gee thanks a lot! now you are making me want to write, and I have other stories to finish! I really hope you write more jasper fanfics I love him! He's an amazing character. Keep this one up it's hella good! Update soon please!!!

Aww, I got a little teary when Whit explained about the tickets. *sniffle* Emmett was suprisingly tactful there too.

OH HELLA LAME!!!! killing his gpa on his bday! Meanie!!! Ok... seriously you gotta update!!!! like now! LOL, it's a good story I like it quite a bit. It's a bit fast paced but I really do enjoy it. Please keep updating.

*sobs* Lots of wonderful drama, but I'm still sorry for his grandfather. He seemed to be a cool person. :(
At least, he met the rest of the family. And strangely, just when I was writing a review for some Linkin Park record on amazon, you mention their concert. Again, you were just reading my mind, you naughty thing. *lol*

Inspiration for an Emmett story? Oh, now THAT sounds interesting. I wouldn't know what to write about him apart from him being painfully straight forward, wrestling with other people and grinning. ;)

"My grandfather, the protector of my virtue." *lol* I love those funny lines of yours.

Do I sense Jasper's coming out in one of the next chapters? I'm so looking forward to that as I honestly don't know how Whitaker's gonna react.
Thx for the cyber hanky. You're too sweet. ;)

I'm in for any Emmett story you may come up with. Emmett is plain fun. He's got that annoying habit of being unembarrassedly honest and straight forward which is most hilarious to read...

Awwww, how sweet. Where's a hanky? ;)

Can awkwardness be great? I mean, it was amazing to read, so perhaps it was a lovely kind of awkwardness...
I'm slowly turning into a weird sort of Jasper fan. I must stop this... I can't keep falling in love with every character you create or use. *lol* Don't worry, though, I'm definitely unable to stop reading whatever you post, hun. :D

Poor Whitaker. *hands over pain killers*
Was it just me or did anyone else immediately have "the football players love to torture me" line from Good Charlotte's "I heard you" on their mind, too? ;)

By the way, I just loved that little paragraph, starting with "'Where are you going?' he asked.". It was simply hilarious. :)

Awww, you're too kind. Thanks for being such a regular poster, then. :D