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Flowers?? That is strange it must have something to do with what happened in the field. Oh i have a feeling not killing him is going to come back to haunt them.

If I were writing this review for my old English teacher, I'd have to spend quite a paragraphs on how this story emphasizes the theme of love; however, too tired for that now. Whitaker is really an unbelievable character. I guess when you've lived such a painful life, you try to keep others from hurting, no matter what they've done to you. While Jasper's joke was extremely cruel, I must say it proved Whitaker's love. Could comment more on that, but I won't bore you with my personal life. I'm curious if you're going to expand on the vampire hunter any. As fanatical as he seems, I doubt he'll stop even if he understands the situation. As to where I've been: I didn't particularly care for the affair with Perkins. His character was too sadistic for my tastes. While your writing was as good as ever, there just wasn't anything for me to contribute at that time. Song stuck in head.....feel good....feel good....should probably go before I get too off topic. I look forward to the next installment. till then, pleasant and peaceful days :)

Yes it was a surprise but from your last story you don't like to make them stay together so my reaction was logical. But i'm happy now. I kinda like crazy guy though i can see where he is coming from. But he's still a threat to the family a person who will most likely not keep quiet knows of their existence very bad indeed. Lets hope the volurie (spelling) doesn't find out about that. they wouldn't be too happy.

Oh, thank goodness! (A) cause you updated! :D (B) cause Jasper didn't die! and (C) cause Jasper didn't find anyone else. You were cruel this chapter! LOL I really enjoyed it! Oh, how I don't want this story to end. But alas, all good things must. Guess only a few left, huh?

Oh, yeah! Forgot to mention - I'm currently working on my own yaoi Twilight fic. It was definitely inspired by this one, but I'm trying my best to make it original! (Actually, I've been trying to come up with a decent fanfic idea for forever, but always hit a wall.) It's a Emmett/OC story. The description is in my profile page. Hopefully, I'll be able to post something soon. I'm just starting on it though. I'm calling it "Blood on White Roses". Just an FYI.

Oh my GOD, you scared the daylights out of me! Sweet chapter though, really. Okay okay I am SO severely lacking in reviews but I've been busy too. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Didn't really care for the whole Perkins affair, but that's just personal taste. The writing was good, as always. The Egyptian theme is interesting. I never really put Egyptian mythology and European mythology together. The new antagonist is a little cliche imo, but I'm liking the snarkiness (if that's a real word). Perhaps a deeper back story would help, but that's in your hands. I'm looking forward to seeing how this concludes. Peace

Yes and no. but now i very strongly dislike you!

ACK! You're killing me! I'm hanging on the edge of my seat. Jasper can't be gone! That was probably my very favorite chapter so far! Beautifully written and so romantic, yet also dramatic! I can't wait for the next one!!!

Interesting new twist. Alas, the ending begins... I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapters in both stories. :D I'm glad you're considering doing the whole story for I'll See. I still kinda wonder if Alice may make an appearance after all this. We'll just have to see what you've got scheming...