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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes it most definitely is. I like this amulet thing it kinda fascinates me. Who would know enough about them to kill them? They keep very quiet about them except for the werewolves the are still a secret. Unless rapist guy knows more about them then he lets on. The denoting of time was a bit choppy but yours was one of the better ones that i have read. I can't do much better. That is one skill that i think just comes with time. That's all for now.
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job as always! Loved it! I personally would really love to see "I'll See" continued thru EVERY chapter of their story from Jasper's point of view! But if I had to pick just one specific scene, it'd be when Jasper's attacked and inadvertently bites and transforms Whitaker. Keep up the great work and I'll anxiously be awaiting the next chapter of both!
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First off Happy New Year! Now that that's over. WOW! I didn't think you had it in you I mean bound hands is one thing full out domination is another. That was most unexpected but interesting. Very intriguing I sort of like how you portrayed Mikes parents the homophobic aspect is what is usually visioned in the small town atmosphere. I liked it can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Poor Mike. I'm glad that Jasper and Whitaker are there for him.
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and your character, Whitaker. He is so real. I've read many of the slash fics for Twilight, I have to say, I wait on baited breath for your next chapter.
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of Mike's abuse yet. And the threesome was hott!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay for scary, protective Jasper! Nice chapter! You didn't take too long to get it out, but as always I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! How sad to think that there are probably many, many teens/people, who are scared to come out to even his/her parents'. Keep up the great work!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just really love Jasper x Whitaker! (And I'm usually not so big a fan of other's OC). Believe it or not, even when I go to see New Moon, I always imagine Jasper with Whitaker. Alice and Jasper are wonderful, but you've created such a great protagonist and compliment to an existing distinguished character. It's almost like they're each other's Yin and Yang. Keep up your great work! Happy New Year!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a perfectly lovely update! Your Jasper and Whitaker just shine, taking on a life of their own. Beautiful.
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was smokin' hot! I've been checking on here almost every day waiting for an update. There are few stories I've ever done that for. Great chapter! Keep up all your great work!