rate_review Reviews

i'm glag your back. that went rather well. It opened a new window to the story. how this will change the dinamics of the relationship between those three. It seems like Mike likes them but is it retured. Will it be a one time thing or not so many question so little answer (right now). WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU!

Wow! What a powerful chapter! I must admit that I've been busy lately and took a break from this story for a while, but man - now I wonder how I managed to stay away! I can't wait to see how this story continues and don't want it to end. Keep it up PLEASE! I really love Whitaker and Jasper's relationship. I can't help, but wonder how far this is going to go with Mike and if Alice is going to show back up eventually? Can't wait to read more! :D

Yes that it will. my one concern is if mike it ready for that. He still has the memories of the rape in his mind. his body might be ready but is he? other than that i have to comments. oh and i know this is one chapter too late but thank god that bastard is going to jail!

Well! That was certainly unexpected. I stopped being lazy and signed into my author account. Can't wait to read more... You're tempting me to write Twilight fan fic, this is odd but strangely good. - Alecto.

One a sick vindictive bastard (excuse my language) always a sick bastard. I can't see a pedophile changing his ways that quickly. I mean he did still try to get Whitaker so he obviously didn't change that much. I think that it is only a matter of time before he slips up again. I don't think he will do it when Whitaker is there to see but i can see it happening. If you do decide for him to slip up please don't write a rape scene or at least not one with detail. It was a good show to how Whitaker changed and how he is slowing getting over his fear and how much Jasper helps him. I think it was a good choice on how you went about that chapter. The baby boy from the beginning of the story is growing up into a man which is very interesting to watch. Although there is still a hint of that boy when he is with Jasper during a difficult time of his life. The need for 'mommy and daddy'. The bringing up the memory of his parents and grandfather could being up stronger 'nightmares' in some but not all. It would also be interesting to go more into what happened to his parents. These are just things that i thought of as i read it not suggestions.

Yeah, one day. What can I say I was bloody bored and couldn't go anywhere so for about 10 hours I read this. I think that Whitaker should have stuck around, though if it had been me I would have reminded Mr. Perkins he's a damned pedo and no one would miss him.

Hey wanted you to know that even though now is the first time I've had a chance to review I'm finding this story very much entertaining and interesting. I think Whitaker did make the right decision keep going I can't wait. Question ever thought about writing how Jasper feels about some of what's going on? Just a thought from a fellow writer.

OMG! So I just finished reading the whole thing. I really love it those far. Whitaker is a great character and I like the way you have characterized Jasper in this piece. Also, I can't believe you went there!! I had a feeling that might happen but was hoping against it. Can't wait to read more!

I actually read this story in one day (long ass day, lol!) and I must say I just love it! Jasper never gets enough lovin' fan fic wise. As for the latest chaper... Dear lord woman you're evil!

Such a lovely, tender scene between them. And then WHAM! You slam us in the face with that ending! But I can't wait to see what happens next.