rate_review Reviews

Yes it was worth the wait. I don't know what it was about the other story but it held my attention better. Don't get me wrong i love You'll See and I find myself looking each time to see if you updated but there is something missing from this one. The mystery or something. I'll tell you more when i can figure it out myself. If you want me to that is, if not just tell me and I'll leave the more negative comments to myself.

After reading the last few chapters this evening I'm going to guess that it's not so much a repeated phrase, as it is a repeated thought given vocalization. That thought being each of them saying "I'll protect you" in some form or another. Of course I realize that this is the wrong answer, but I'm apparently still too 'dazzled' from my 'house call' with the good doctor to be able to see any other recurring items. I'm also blaming said doctor for my most recent abscence...let your imaginations roam with that one! Hehe. Also I must thoroughly agree with GoM on your astounding descriptions of the emotions! The part about them being insanely wonderful, not the jealousy bit, since I'm more of an editor than an author. The shopping scene and the prom were absolutely adorable AKA Cute! Love the "Why do I have to be the girl?" parts, too funny! I'm going to have to look up the song, never heard it. Dang, that was way longer than expected, I'll shut up now.
~Zynda (Foamy the Squirrel Fan Club Member) =P

The dj's reaction was funny! There was a M/M pair at my prom, and a lot of the more conservative ones had very funny looks on their faces when they walked out. The last bit was very romantic :)
@ your response: not what I meant by preparations, and we called it cute cause that's what it was.

Aww I was looking forward to him learning to dance. This chapter seemed to lack your usual umph so to speak.

A lovely addition to a beautiful story. The relationship you've created between these two is simply gorgeous.

Yaaayy, prom time! Can't wait until after the prom, hehe. I thought of a great slow song if you're in need of one. It's Mazzy Star - Fade Into You. Such a sweet and beautiful song. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Ah, prom. Brings back memories. This was a very cute chapter. I liked how you wrote the sales rep. Jasper and Whitaker need to watch their volume level though. Ah well, it's prom. They were probably having too much fun with the preparations to care. Nice work on this chapter! :)

It was really CUTE! That is all i have to say on that matter.

I was having kind of a crappy day, and then I saw that this story had been updated. And suddenly my day was better! A great update, the tenderness between these two just sings! Lovely.

Vampire prom hmm? Sounds like a Halloween movie to me. I vote the voyeuristic squirrel for the mass murderer!