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No no, the ending was fine. I mean, we all have imagination, right? ;)
Besides, I really, really adore those details in your story ever since Whitaker has been turned... like what water and fabric feels like on his skin. Or the detail that he can't wear contacts because of the venom. You really think about this a lot, and you pay so much attention to even the smallest things. It's admirable. ^_^


@ Zynda: By the way, thx for that lovely review you left for my HP ff. You're a darling. ^_^ Carlisle will be expecting your call so you can let him know when he's supposed to pick you up for some coffee and cake... which, frankly, I don't understand because I only said he should come onto the show with you. o_O
Also, JoD tells me to tell you that he's deeply sorry and wants to make up for it, preferably with coffee and cake. (He's probably scared to death because of my declaring war on him...). What's it with men and coffee and cake these days?? And shouldn't one think that a grown up JoD can tell you so on his own?? *sighs*

Hooray! Another chapter. That made my borning. Anyway, this chapter was up to the high standards of the ones that came before. The relationship between these two is perfection!

*storms in pulling a toy wagon overflowing with pastry trays and candy boxes* I'm baaaaack! I have a harrowing (sp?) tale to tell about my abscence... But first let me say that finally being able to catch up and read the last few chapters was worth the wait!

And now I shall explain..

Bella was the instigator of the 'cougar' comment. (Honestly if she didn't want me to ogle her man, she shouldn't let him out!) Anyway... the next time I heard her say it, I commented on how she better hope I'm not a cougar or her man might enjoy eating me more than her! (since her scent must've changed along with her) Then just as she was about to lunge for me I was abducted by The Jellyfish of Dooooom! So, in conclusion I thank you guys for the rescue! Unfortunately I've spent the last several days cleaning it's tank *shudders*, hence my abscence.

I'm so happy to be back!

P.S.- Hate to inform ya, but the J of D does actually sparkle in daylight...but it may be a coincidence. *shrugs*

I'm not done reading this story yet. The good thing about coming in late to a story is that I can read more chapters at one time! I feel lucky. This story is beautiful. The characters are well done without being OVERdone. And the dynamic between them is lovely. Can't wait to get caught up and be waiting on pins and needles with the rest of your readers!

I really loved the little banter when they arrived at school. ;) And then how Bella blushed because she asked for the "being late" reason. Most hilarious! ^_^

"'Could you think of something else?' Edward sounded pained." Hehe, serves him right. *lol*

Honestly, this chapter was just filled to the brim with really funny lines and moments. I absolutely adored it!

A vampire jellyfish... hmmm... honey, you should have NEVER said that. Should have NEVER even thought about that. My mind's going completely hysteric now, imagining what that could look like. ;P I guess Jasper would highly appreciate it... you know, in bed... and so on. Oh God, please let's stop this before it gets outta hand!!! *lol*

Oh, and good news (not jellyfish related, though): my first chapter is betaed and ready to be posted. If only I could find a decent and catchy summary for it... I totally suck at that. o_O

@ Zynda: *gasps* Thank God you're still alive and with us. EVIL, EVIL Bella! I've always warned of that, but would anyone listen? No, of course not. "Lovely Bella here, stupid Bella there"... it was just a matter of time until she'd go completely nuts.

Have summoned our army (beware of the Talk Show Army of Doom...), am ready to declare war upon The Jellyfish of Doom. Don't worry, you will be safe from now on!
Must correct you, though... it's no actual "sparkling" in the sun, it's more of a "I spent years in some nuclear power plant and now I can't wash it off anymore" thingy (has anyone seen the "The Simpsons" episode which makes fun of "The X-Files", with the glowing Mr. Burns??). Very unsanitary. Rather stay away from it, believe me.
Unless some vampire has canoodled in sin, of course... then the whole sparkling detail would make sense. Hm, can't think of anyone stupid enough to have done so, though. I mean, Bella's still human, so who else shuld have been such a moron?? o_O

You can have Edward too, you know. I have my ways to "convince" him (= he's a bloody coward and fears my almighty frown). Your choice on Carlisle may be wiser, though. Edward's such a PMS queen... he can be really bitchy at times, and we don't want him ruining our very first show. Besides, it's always good to have a doctor on the show. ;) And we'll distract Esme long enough for you two to have some... ahem, fun. ;)

nice transition chapter. It'll be interesting to see how things play out from here. Not too much to comment on. Keep up the good work!

I just hate Bella. She ruined what could have been some most promising smut. o_O
Otherwise, that chapter was really sweet. ^_^

As much as I'm tempted to say yes to the option of threesome-smut, I'm still against it. Edward's been so weird lately, and I'm convinced that him being involved with both of them sexually would destroy their at the present slightly unstable relationship. Besides, Edward's really not the type for a threesome, in my humble opinion. He'd probably faint right before the action starts. Hehe.
And it wouldn't be fair to allow Edward some fun when he's actually cheating on Bella. He needs to decide whether to continue this thingy with her or not... I mean, after all they're still officially with each other, right? Sounds like Edward simply needs a good therapist... ;P

*sobs* I thought the jellyfish idea was brilliant. :( *lol*

I vote no. Sexual encounters are more enjoyable when you're making an emotional connection between 2 people who love each other. When there's more than two people, there's less of a connection. Since sex is about 40% physical and 60% emotional (roughly, I'm not sure if there are the actual statistics. If anything, its more than 60% emotional), having threesome would be less intimate, which would make a less interesting story. Hope that made sense. I don't usually review stuff like that.

As for the robot thing, robots are awesome and it sounded like a good idea at the time.

I know you do thats what makes them so interesting and keeps me reading. Was Witaker raped?