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person Anonia
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love where this story is heading, I've been following it since the beginning, but I usually dont review sorry. Keep up the good work! ^^
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HA! I just knew it was Mr.-oh-I’m-always-so-innocent-and-decorous-Cullen… this gift of prediction is a curse, though. I’ve watched “Dexter” and guessed correctly who could be the serial killer from season one as soon as he showed up for the first time, being all nice and unsuspicious. O_o
Thx for the hug, though (could I perhaps get my cookie at a later time?? I even promise to share it with Kiki…).

The “brooding” conversation was simply hilarious. But what could Whitaker be hiding? Hm, I’m in a rather silly mood today, so you probably rather don’t want to hear my theories… like Whitaker’s parents were gigantic, black jellyfish who wanted to take over the world, but then got turned into jellyfish pancakes by an even more evil truck. Or perhaps Whitaker used to be a girl before, and his parents… nah, that’s a bit TOO stupid. *lol*
Sorry, after guessing Edward correctly, I’m afraid I’ve run out of luck. I’m only talented when it comes to crime series and thrillers. Then again, I want to be surprised by whatever you’ll come up with concerning Whitaker’s story. ^_^

“ditto on having Zynda for first guest.” – phew, I’m glad you agree on that. Wouldn’t want to start a fight with my partner in crim… ahem, I mean show business, already about the first show. ;)
“But just cupcakes? What happened to cookies?” – alright, alright. I’ll take that back. Make that a plate full of cookies (can we also ask for one with white chocolate chunks and raspberries in it??), cupcakes, chocolate and pieces of cake. Are you satisfied now?!? *lol*
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that you’ve mentioned it:
“The clearing itself was oddly shaped, not round or even oval. The grass was fairly short, and there were no weeds. I noticed a small clump of flowers: blue-violet hyacinth, magenta cyclamen, and white asphodel; sorrow, resignation, and regret. It didn’t occur to me that none of them were in season.”
I only fully noticed it after you mentioned it at the beginning of the next chapter. It’s rather strange, though. Are we talking about magic here? Has Hogwarts opened some satellite station around Forks?? You got me really curious with this part… and somehow I got goose bumps from it as if it were calling for something creepy. It also made me feel a bit sad. Can’t explain it, though. (Probably just evil flowers who want to scare me off so they can have my cookies…)
But I trust you to explain it sooner or later… you have my full attention on it! ;)
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a twist. It's hard to imagine Edward not being obsessed with Bella. What could Witaker's deep dark secret be? I think it involves vampires but then that would be your call now wouldn't it. Can't wait to read what will happen.
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love well written slash, and this is it. There's a depth to the characters and stories that draws a reader in. LOVELY!
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dunno if it's just immortality or what, but I think your right about the brooding being a vampire's favorite past time thing. An episode of Unskipable on the Escapist makes fun of Vincent from FF for the same thing. Whittaker's hiding the fact that he's actually a robot in disguise. It makes sense!
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, I’m down with a cold and some silly fever, but this chapter made me smile despite all my suffering. ^_^
I’m glad they finally reconciled again… and especially that they made out again. ;) Smut in the woods is just great to read.

I’ll take a bold guess and say it’s Edward. Shocked? Yeah, me too! *lol* But after all, Edward’s behavior during the past chapters has been rather… strange, and I’ve started wondering if he may have feelings for Whitaker as well. Again, it’s just a bold guess. I assume it’d have to be another vampire since they’d both surely heard a beating heart had it been some human. That’s why it can’t be any of the wolf guys like Jacob, either (because of the smell).

“I'm not sure the producers of the channels would let us on so easily... Unless you know some people, of course.” – Are you kidding?? I know Emmett. If they don’t roll out the red carpet for us and offer us a big show at prime time, then we’ll send Emmett over to “convince” them. We could also send Jasper along to manipulate their emotions towards us. And if all of that’s no help, then we’ll simply send Rosalie over to get on everyone’s nerves until they’ll surrender voluntarily. Hehe.
It must be the fever that makes me extra stupid today… ;P
person Kiki
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi I would say that it’s Edward, he is a little strange in this story and I think it would make sense. Uhh and this chapter was hot ;-)
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That squirrel's a spy!
I'm glad to see Jasper's done brooding. He tends to read too much into things.
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow thats just kinda scary don't know how i would feel with someone watching me. I'm kinda curious exactly what Jasper was brooding about all the time. I know you talked about it some maybe i just didn't get it all.
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