rate_review Reviews

Finally, when I had almost given up hope, there’s one more reason to dislike Mike. Life really is beautiful. ;) How do you do that, making each chapter have a new idea of entertaining me in unexpected but very pleasant ways?? You’re awesome. O.O

You know, Edward’s just a weirdo. He probably didn’t take his pills that morning. I wouldn’t worry too much about him anyway. Could as well be that Bella locked the bedroom door and he hasn’t gotten any “action” lately. Hehe.

And what’s that? “I really think "The Jellyfish of Doom Show" would be #1 most-watched on YouTube!”?? On youtube?? Honey, I’m not talking about pathetic youtube here (sorry, youtube, don’t take it personally!), but about ALL those huge TV channels… oh, did I already mention that Edward’s not the only one who didn’t take his pills today?? *lol*

I think it was Bella! maybe... and that's why Edwards been so pissed, cuz she smells all aroused imagining Whit and Jas together, making it harder for him to resist her. If it was her, he's gonna be in for it tonight! Or I could be completely wrong and it was jealous Edward. *shrugs*

Yay, I'm glad I make you laugh, it's good to have a purpose in life, lol. And you know damn well I haven't forgotten about promises for a 'Music' smuttake! Hell, any smuttake for that matter..hehe.

@ G of M - *pouting* What if I can't find a Cullen to bring? They seem to scatter when I get near... muttering phrases like 'cougar' even though they are technically waaayyyy older than I. *pouts again*

Edward sure is moody. I understand being defensive, but he could at least try to understand the situation before getting aggressive. Mike's acting out of line though. In a relationship or not, you don't just randomly kiss someone you're not in a relationship with without some sort of mutual understanding. Mike's looking like a more selfish character in this chapter. I thought he was nicer than that.

Great chapter, I like where you’re taking the story. I also think that it is great that you made Whitaker so daring and so fearless, but still it shows that inside he is not really that sure of himself. Oh and I love that Whitakers nickname for Jasper, Treasure it shows how he really feels in just one word. I’m still loving the story :-)

Hun, obviously, we are ALL psychic! *lol* Must be the stories on this site or something... or could it be that Jasper's screwing around with my mind again?? Bad Jasper. No blood cookie for Jasper (reminds me... does anyone remember the scene from "Buffy" where Spike put Weetabix into his blood to make it crunchier?? *lol*).

Happy New Year, indeed. Wow, awesome. O.O I found Whitaker calling Jasper "treasure" really adorable. It just fit with how he and his personality changed. He's still Whitaker, but of course he's a bit different by now, and you made that just beautifully. :)

"God isn’t here, but I’d be happy to substitute." *lol* The dirty talking came unexpected, but it was so perfect for that moment. ;)

mmhmmf sdg fke jfmmmgnr *sips milk then wipes away brownie crumbs* Ah, better. As I was saying, Thanks for the brownies! (I'm not gonna get the munchies in a bit am I? 'Cuz that would cause a viscious cycle to begin, eating more brownies for the munchies and so on) And I even came (pardon the pun) close to the correct answer! Applause for brave Whitaker as well, kinda like submissive Jaz.

Oh I almost forgot to answer this chapter's query. If he's 'treasure', does that mean that when he's the top he becomes buried treasure?? hehehe, sorry couldn't resist. I love it by the way.

And now we've come full circle. It's not so much that I didn't like him as a character. It's just I wouldn't get along with him as a person. I didn't mean anything against your writing, and it's good that some people don't like characters. If everyone likes them, he/she's probably a Mary Sue

*Raises a hand while bouncing in the seat* Ooo, I know, pick me!! He'll show him by riding him like a cowboy at a rodeo! J/K.....kinda. Hehe =P

Hi I really like your story and I have been reading it from the start. Please please update soon. I think Whitaker is a great character and he and Jasper are great together. I¡¦m on the page everyday to see if there is a new chapter. I think this chapter is okay, it can¡¦t be love all the time and it¡¦s a great way to show that Whitaker is very much in love and trust Jasper but that Jasper may not be so much in control as he would like. Great chapter ƒº. But Please make Jasper come back soon.
Keep up the good work.
Kiki