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for Lost and Found

by Valleygoat

person Elijarocks
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy COW!!! I have missed a lot of chapters!!

I love how you are able to bring out each charature, with the writing that you do!! I can just feel the way The Cullens love your charature. Her live was hell and now it is better. I think it is cool how you put Jacob and Bella together, and the wedding that is being told.
I cannot wait for the next chapter...Great job!!

Elijarocks
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely adore this so far!
poor Carrie to have suffered so much!
person Jenniefer
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!
First, I was thrilled to see that you had updated! :D
Second, poor Carrie, oh, poor, poor Carrie! My body ached as I read about it - I know you were afraid of taking it too far, or maybe even not far enough, and to some it may be too far, I think it was just far enough. This way you really showed how extremely cruel her 'family' is and hos strong Carrie is really being by putting up with it all. After everything she's been through, I get why Edward fell to his knees, and why Alice was hysterical. I really hope you update this sometime soon again, as it is of the awesome.
Also, thanks for dedicating it to me :D Love on you, fellow writer <3
person uchiha mizuki
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GOD i CRIED!!

this chapter is soooooooo tear jerking and heart breaking!

i really hope that there will be a happy ending or at least something similar to it.
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG
please update soon
i need to know what happens
person Jenniefer
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have read all the chapters after each other now for a few nights and... and I need to know how it end! This is brilliant, and I love the OC you've put in. I was never one for Bella, thought she had zero personality, but Carrie is a firecracker and I quite enjoy her and Edward's as well as her and Emmett's relationships. I think this was well thought out before you started writing and I'm thrilled I got to reading it. I usually don't read anything unfinished, but since I don't know if it ends there or not, I won't say too much :P I really hope there is another couple of chapters in this sometime in the near future (no hurry tho) and possibly a happy end of Carrie, god knows she deserves it.
**
As for your friend, I dunno how much of Carrie and her story you've based on your friend, but if anything she has had to go through was anything like this, tell her she's earned the respect and admiration of a woman in Sweden, half the world away I'm sure. And you, for writing about something so difficult and heartbreaking, has earned much of the same. I wish you two a long and happy friendship! But that was more of a PS really...

Well done!
Jen
person xox_girl
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
i hope she makes it !
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!!!! i wanna read the next chappie!!!! i soooo curious!
person maderkils92
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!! I AM HAVING WITHDRAWLS FROM MY ADDICTION.
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i sooo missed you!

i love your carrie and edward. and this story rocks!

have fun!
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