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for Lost and Found

by Valleygoat

person Elijarocks
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! Thanks Valley....Cannot wait for the next chapter for this story!!!!


I love how you keep putting in the different visions from Alice...I wonder what happens during the winter months...Thanks for writing this story!! I think it is much better than the normal Book!!

Thaks once again Valley! ;) ;)
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I guess you really hate Bella. She's not true to her character in your story at all. Bella would never dress up as a stereotypical vampire & act all tacky. I hope you're being ironic. I mean it's kind of funny like a parody. 'edward loves me I'm his brand of heroine' haha that shit is funny
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhhhhhh..............things are really interesting now.

got any more?
person Elijarocks
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please say you are working on the next chapter?????? Cannot wait for it!!!
person Elijarocks
schedule July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!!!!! Great Chapter!! Love it!

Truely love how the Cullens during the part of the shooting star wanted Carrie to be a part of the family, while Carrie just wanted them to be happy!! Soo cool!! Also love the fishing part !!!

You are a great writer! Plase keep it up... Would like to know what else happens!!
person Elijarocks
schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK.....I truely love this story!!!
I have a few questions but other than that the story is AWESOME!!!!! One: How can she feel that Bella was lieing? (idk what chapter but Jas asked if it was true) Two: Does she have a part of her that is Vamp???? Please keep this story going love to see how it turns out. !!
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good story.

see you around!
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. And you are doing the plot quite well. I do hope you write more soon.
person stephanie
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just get them to get all ready
person Stephanie
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just write another all ready
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