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December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Amazing~ Part two was just as awesome as part one, but maybe better because there was a pleasurable lack of clothing at the end.
And you're right! Now I owe you some more from mine as well. I'll get right on that and hopefully it won't take me too terribly long. <3
And you're right! Now I owe you some more from mine as well. I'll get right on that and hopefully it won't take me too terribly long. <3
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is just...wow.
I think what I liked most was that you somehow managed to keep both Artemis and Butler in character - their reactions, their behaviour towards one another. I like how you kept Artemis his ususal dominant self yet managed to realistically convey Butler being on top. I don't think I've read anything remotely similar and so realistic and well done.
I also liked Artemis's age being 24, rather than in his teens. It speaks of experience that would allow him to act in the way that he did. I doubt the story would have been as good if he'd been 17 or 18 or something.
Also, Butler's thoughts and mental commentary - hilarious.
Plus the steamy sex - bravo. Very nicely written!
Thanks for writing and sharing, this is truly a gem in a fandom which sadly doesn't have nearly enough high-quality A/B fics.
I think what I liked most was that you somehow managed to keep both Artemis and Butler in character - their reactions, their behaviour towards one another. I like how you kept Artemis his ususal dominant self yet managed to realistically convey Butler being on top. I don't think I've read anything remotely similar and so realistic and well done.
I also liked Artemis's age being 24, rather than in his teens. It speaks of experience that would allow him to act in the way that he did. I doubt the story would have been as good if he'd been 17 or 18 or something.
Also, Butler's thoughts and mental commentary - hilarious.
Plus the steamy sex - bravo. Very nicely written!
Thanks for writing and sharing, this is truly a gem in a fandom which sadly doesn't have nearly enough high-quality A/B fics.
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
Great characterization! Hot! Romantic! Amazing use of analogies - that applies to all your stories, of course!
Great chapter!
Great story!
P.S- Please update "Three Wishes" soon! I do like it, even though your characterization of the Tooth Fairy wasn't as canon compliant as I would have liked. Yes, I'm a total geek for wanting you to be canon compliant to Fairly OddParents, but hey, I like being a total geek! Basically, please update "Three Wishes" soon! Please...
About contacting:
I'm on FanFiction.Net with the same name. You know, unknown20troper, who faved and reviewed Ineluctable, and put you on Author Alert and their fave author list.
Great characterization! Hot! Romantic! Amazing use of analogies - that applies to all your stories, of course!
Great chapter!
Great story!
P.S- Please update "Three Wishes" soon! I do like it, even though your characterization of the Tooth Fairy wasn't as canon compliant as I would have liked. Yes, I'm a total geek for wanting you to be canon compliant to Fairly OddParents, but hey, I like being a total geek! Basically, please update "Three Wishes" soon! Please...
About contacting:
I'm on FanFiction.Net with the same name. You know, unknown20troper, who faved and reviewed Ineluctable, and put you on Author Alert and their fave author list.
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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I've read lately! It turns me into a giggling fangirl..
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November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*looks back at his last review* lol man the spelling.....SEE WHAT YOUR WRITING DOES TO ME!!!
lol But really, Your writing is some of the best I've seen. You capture the essence of Artemis and Butler, to the point of incredibility.
You really seem to write them in the way the Auther did. In some ways even better. I absolutly adore your Butler. ^_^ He wants his charge so bad but he's tormented about it. lol Artemis doesnt help at all when he teases. *GUH* this new chappy was just awesome. Made my heart go *Thunka-thunka*. lol Anyway Here's another *HUGS*!
Your Fan
Ryan.
lol But really, Your writing is some of the best I've seen. You capture the essence of Artemis and Butler, to the point of incredibility.
You really seem to write them in the way the Auther did. In some ways even better. I absolutly adore your Butler. ^_^ He wants his charge so bad but he's tormented about it. lol Artemis doesnt help at all when he teases. *GUH* this new chappy was just awesome. Made my heart go *Thunka-thunka*. lol Anyway Here's another *HUGS*!
Your Fan
Ryan.
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nom nom nom! Very good. I er...I'm gonna have issues, now. Thanks. A lot.
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh you must write more! This one was very visual. I could amost picture myself on that beach (spying on them, though how I'd manage that without Butler noticing me I don't know..).
I'll make a deal with you.. I'll finish my story (you reviewed one~~! one of my favorite authors~~ *spazzes a moment*) if you write more~ :)
I'll make a deal with you.. I'll finish my story (you reviewed one~~! one of my favorite authors~~ *spazzes a moment*) if you write more~ :)
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Very in character. I definitely want another part.
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*happy sigh* ahhh...
I'm not much of a reviewer, but how am I supposed to let someone know I'd like more if I don't speak up?
*snort*
This is very well written, everything well done... no smut, though... but I can live with that. :D
Sorry if I'm a little incoherent... no more than a few hours of sleep and a yummy fanfiction spree can do that. I haven't even logged in... hm.
I'm not much of a reviewer, but how am I supposed to let someone know I'd like more if I don't speak up?
*snort*
This is very well written, everything well done... no smut, though... but I can live with that. :D
Sorry if I'm a little incoherent... no more than a few hours of sleep and a yummy fanfiction spree can do that. I haven't even logged in... hm.
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. ^_~ And I really want to see Butler tear his shirt off...