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for The Last Night

by belladonnacullen

schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful piece of writing. Tastefully done and also exciting.
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your stuff! Have you written something that details their sexual encounters when Bella first becomes a vampire??? You capture each of the characters so precisely. I wish the books were really written like this!
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely beautiful and seemed very much as if it belonged in the Twilight 'verse. That's something a lot of writers of fan fiction can't seem to accomplish, yet you seem to do so effortlessly. Bravo!
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you're awesome!
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, this was just beautifully perfect. All three chapters. There were so many sweet details in it such as the little X-ray vision part which I found absolutely hilarious. The best, however, was definitely the Samson and Delilah comparison… very smart and sophisticated. I loved it. :)

“Not even a cricket or cicada would come this close to a vampire's lair.” Made me wonder… what about vampire crickets? *lol*
person DeeLish
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!

One of the best Twilight fics i've ever read. It all flowed so beautifully and was kept very much in character. I can't wait for more, i know you'll do it justice!

DL xXx
person KathrynH
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*squeeelzzz* nuff said!
person Sekhmet
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....wow.....ugh.....delicious. Please more?!!?!?!
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