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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Thank you for uploading it. It was so cute! The ending was really good as well.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, after what I've seen you coming up with and writing, I honestly don't think you'd have done any badly written battle scenes. ;)
Apart from everything else I've enjoyed in your story, I especially love how you made it end. It was sweet, but not trashy. :)
Apart from everything else I've enjoyed in your story, I especially love how you made it end. It was sweet, but not trashy. :)
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! I love a good bit of two hot men fighting over bella!!! Although I have to admit I'm on team Edward! Please write lots more! B x
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"I had to speak to the dog." *lol*
That was quite some hot smut, even if you didn't tell us all about it. ;)
With every new chapter, I just like it even more. It's amazing.
That was quite some hot smut, even if you didn't tell us all about it. ;)
With every new chapter, I just like it even more. It's amazing.
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. You manage to not only capture Bella’s inner strife so well, but also Edward’s and Jacob’s. It makes one feel sorry for all three of them. And of course, the smut is just great! *lol*
Besides, the unknown threat builds up quite some tension. I can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen in the next chapter. ;)
Besides, the unknown threat builds up quite some tension. I can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen in the next chapter. ;)
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story and extremely hot!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, loving the play of characters and the switching back and forth between POVs. Was wondering if you have a Beta cause I noticed quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes which always makes me itch. If you're looking for someone to proof-read, send me an email at osh@eircom.net
Other than that, loving it!!
Other than that, loving it!!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I will tell ya though reviews can be hard to come by sometimes. I Have two stories on here and each only has about 2 reviews and one has 300 hits and the other 1165. So people mainly just like to read on here not many review but keep upt he good work :)
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,
Ive been coming onto this site for a few nights in a row, hoping to see an update on this story and you dont disapoint! Im loving it! What will happened with the rivalry between edward and jake? I dying for a bit of fighting over bella action!
Keep updating please!!
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Ive been coming onto this site for a few nights in a row, hoping to see an update on this story and you dont disapoint! Im loving it! What will happened with the rivalry between edward and jake? I dying for a bit of fighting over bella action!
Keep updating please!!
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