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for The House That Jacob Built

by astartelydianna

person lucy-willow
schedule January 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
great story, erotic in places, funny in places, kinky in places. It all fits together so well.Damn I wish the actual movie had ended this way..
person Kat
schedule November 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
More!!!
schedule December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've always been a major Jacob fan so I loved this story. I love how u did her thoughts his thoughts,
I love how u described the love sences and gave a good storyline as well... Idk I loved it pls keep writing
more stories
person Justice
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok it was good story but him turning into a wolf at the end during inter corse was little odd but I see it was needed. I liked the story though
person Kali1979
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, I am so for the bella/jacob stories. He is just so sweet to her, and when she realizes she loves him too its great. Totally love it, can't wait for more!
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You actually did a great job with 'smutty'...it was classy and yet sexy...well done :)
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, seems like everyone's having a pup except for me. *lol* Nah, I'm more into cats anyway, thank you. ;)

I loved the wedding chapter. I love this story anwyay. *sighs* And all that without even liking Jacob a lot. You must be a genius. ;)
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with what wyldetygress said, though: the drinking detail didn't fit. Neither of them would do/allow that when she's pregnant, especially for the first time. O_o
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this entire story. Just not enough Jacob stories out there to satisfy me! One thing tho. The last chapter, with the wedding, is bothering me. You had Bella say it was good they were walking since they had both been drinking. Jacob would never have allowed her to drink alcohol while preggers with his baby. Just my opinion. LOVED IT ANYWAY! lol Keep them coming!
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story! Please tell me you are going to write more!
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