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January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is by far the most amazing story I have ever read. You are a very talented writer and Stephanie Meyer has nothing on you!! This story story is fantastic please continue to write and if there is anything else that you have written please let me know I would love to read it.
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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter is my "new" favorite chapter. Okay, this chapter was... Well, amazing! I can't imagine that Ms. Meyer could do their early years any more justice that you've done here. Emmett is spot on, his exuberance and joy in whatever life throws at him is portrayed with perfection. And Edward? Well, what can one say about him except, "Sigh..." Yes, he's here in all his glory.
Lovely, lovely work.
Lovely, lovely work.
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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love your Emmett! He's so playful, so funny, so sweet! And yes, I'd love for you to do an outtake. His POV or Rosalie's, doesn't really matter to me. You can write anything and make it perfect, you know that! ;)
I really feel for Tanya though... there's no telling what I'd do if I found out that one of my (day-)dreams was actually more than a dream, or wishful thinking, or whatever you want to call it...
I really feel for Tanya though... there's no telling what I'd do if I found out that one of my (day-)dreams was actually more than a dream, or wishful thinking, or whatever you want to call it...
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There were so many things to love about this chapter. I am blown away by how effortlessly you're revealing so many things about them. Their predatory instincts are a part of who and what they are - the urge for dominance, possessiveness, and need to protect their own - these are all part of the vampire's character. And each of these characters is so flawlessly themselves! Nothing rings untrue in their words or actions, all of it seems as if it would be canon in the Twilight 'verse. Beautifully done, as always.
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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Loved your version of Edward's change. Please update soon, I can't wait for what will happen next!
And I have to say, I'm impressed with Esme. She's younger than Edward, but she seems to be coping so much better... ;)
And I have to say, I'm impressed with Esme. She's younger than Edward, but she seems to be coping so much better... ;)
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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story never fails to move, delight, sadden, and intrigue. Yet another flawless chapter.
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am BEGGING for an update! update update update update update!!!!
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November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you're showing us Rosalie's early conflicts, which are so much reflected in her later years. Rosalie is a character that is harder to understand, always seeming slightly outside the tight circle of the Cullens. The interaction between Rosalie and Edward is flawless. Lovely.
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November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you before how much I love your writing? ;)
Let me guess, she's bringing Emmett, isn't she? Can't wait for the next chapter! You are brilliant!
Let me guess, she's bringing Emmett, isn't she? Can't wait for the next chapter! You are brilliant!
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this exploration of Edward's early years. AND the start of his sometimes tempestuous relationship with Rose!