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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's not that I disliked the earlier chapters, but chapter 7 and 8 were extremely outstanding. I admire your talent to actually write down everything so well since I can only imagine how difficult it must be at times for you (you said so yourself in an A/N). When you write about Edward's struggle, I can really see him standing in front of me as he fights with himself. That really happens with fanfics with me. Also, it's wonderful to see the story turning away from fun into desperation - those kinda stories just are my favorite ones. :)