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by TheBlindQueen

schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. I'd love to see more of your writing.

"Only in the realm of blood and my own fragile mortality should he wear that particular expression that betrayed how hard won his control was." was a wonderful line. Your choice of words and expressions is amazing. :)
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good fic, short or not. :) I liked it. It was very well written. Good luck with anything else you write!
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