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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am completely sucked into your story! I love the idea of Jasper and Bella being together. THANK YOU!
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"... I do intend on continuing what we just started.”?? Oh, did I already mention that I just LOVE Jasper? *lol* I really hate to say this, but in this story he's actually way cooler than Edward can ever be. *hides from Edward after admitting this* ;P
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oo oo oo, this keeps getting better. Bring on the smut! lol
Aside from that, I think it's an interesting premise; the Cullen's turning away Jasper is definitely a twist I've never seen before. And while there are a few mistakes in the grammar, it's still easy to read and understand. I look forward to reading more. =)
Aside from that, I think it's an interesting premise; the Cullen's turning away Jasper is definitely a twist I've never seen before. And while there are a few mistakes in the grammar, it's still easy to read and understand. I look forward to reading more. =)
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story you've got here, I really like it! The plot's great and so is the character portrayal as well, as the character interaction, of course! I love your Jasper and I really like your Bella too! Everything is quite well written, apart from a few typos and grammar mistakes, for example; in the three first chapters you wrote "Folks" instead of "Forks", nothing too big, so never mind, I guess, but you might want to fix them, just a tip!
Finally some romance, but I want more, laughs! Therefore please update soon...ps And don't forget about the smut?!
Finally some romance, but I want more, laughs! Therefore please update soon...ps And don't forget about the smut?!
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It’s absolutely fine that there’s no full romance yet. I like how you describe their slow approach. I especially love the details. This story is like a mug of warm, deliciously smelling cocoa… very cosy and lovely. ;)
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the new post! Anxiously awaiting the next.
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so enjoying this story please hurry I can't wait to see what else happens to Bella and Jasper. I'm glad I found this story and joined the community its been helping me write my own fanfics.
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the newest chapter! I was so glad to see this one updated!
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! It's the first BellaxJasper that I've read (are there even any more on here??) and so far, you've got me hooked. My only disappointment is that the chapters are too short. :)
I want to read more, like, right now!
Congrats, can't wait for the next chapter.
I want to read more, like, right now!
Congrats, can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now Bella/Jasper is something rare, indeed, and although I’m no big Jasper fan, I have to admit that your story just has the certain something. They are both broken and lonely, and it’s a lovely idea to start things slowly and have them providing company for each other. Really curious where this will lead to… ;)