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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The flashback was AWESOME! Loved seeing another layer to their relationship, the way it was at the beginning. I've always been fascinated with the dynamic between them. Their love story is beautiful and gets far too little attention. I'm glad to see them as the focus of this wonderful story.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You managed to convey the intimacy between these two in a lovely and natural way. And the scene where they meet for the first time was... well, perfect. As always, you leave me wanting more, but in a good way.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Little stories have Jasper's POV in some chapters, and even fewer offer such a brilliant view into him as you do. I'm always amazed once again about your eloquence which is both very, very smart and touchingly charming. You could probably even write about mealworms and I'd still fall in love with them simply through your writing. ;)
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story and can't wait for more. Its nice to see the interaction between Alice and Jasper that you don't get a lot of in the books. Please Please Please post more soon.
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It’s simply adorable and beautifully written. ^_^
Many others before me have already said that Alice and Jasper get way too little attention as a couple in the books, but that’s the truth. I’m glad someone finally decided to put them into the very center.
Many others before me have already said that Alice and Jasper get way too little attention as a couple in the books, but that’s the truth. I’m glad someone finally decided to put them into the very center.
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October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another superb chapter! The dynamic between Alice and Jasper is wonderful. Can't wait for the next installment.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be following this one with GREAT interest. You're off to a superb start, as always. The Alice/Jasper dynamic is so well done. They've never gotten the attention they deserve, LOL!