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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking fantastic!! I loved it!! SOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg! That was .... Epic! See Bella or Rosalie dont need to exist. Wonderful writing. Very Lustful. Horrah for Emmett the dominant. Keep it up!:P!!!
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April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
At times I found it steadily unbelievable, There needs to be a balance between smut and story and while the smut is good I feel like the story is lacking.
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February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is WAAAAY not what I expected, but I found that I did enjoy it very much. It was surprising and refreshingly different. Good job.
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Twilight slash story I have ever read. The Edward/Emmett/James/Jacob pairing blew my fucking mind! I'm all for the double penetration idea. Also, I hope you kill off Rosalie and Bella eventually in this story. Also that Sam and his pack gets what's coming to them.
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*blood dripping out of nose*
okay..............
lost my train of......of.........of.................................
*passes out on floor from blood loss*
this is hubby typing........wow.......she is out!
okay..............
lost my train of......of.........of.................................
*passes out on floor from blood loss*
this is hubby typing........wow.......she is out!
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December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Certainly wasn't expecting that. I liked it.
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my this is becoming a huge drama! I hope everyone will be ok!
I want more of the 4 mates romance and more of Jasper and Paul (oh my what a pervert I am!)
I want more of the 4 mates romance and more of Jasper and Paul (oh my what a pervert I am!)
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I'm loving Revealing the True Mates! A few (naughty) suggestions: Have your foursome engage in double penetration. That way, two of them could fuck one up the ass at the same time while he gives the fourth a blowjob. References to pubic hair are always appreciated. Maybe Jasper could go smooth as part of his sub role? Also, it seems like at this point, nudity around the house would not be such a big deal, providing that sex is still somewhat discreet.
Regards,
Alec
I'm loving Revealing the True Mates! A few (naughty) suggestions: Have your foursome engage in double penetration. That way, two of them could fuck one up the ass at the same time while he gives the fourth a blowjob. References to pubic hair are always appreciated. Maybe Jasper could go smooth as part of his sub role? Also, it seems like at this point, nudity around the house would not be such a big deal, providing that sex is still somewhat discreet.
Regards,
Alec
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Alec is such a genius! Double penetration would rock their socks! But I hope the reviewers with their silly ramblings won't influence the author! ^_^