rate_review Reviews

This is getting really good, and I hope that Seth takes Tony's words in to heart. I really don't want anything happen to Leah and little Sarah. I can't wait to see what happens next to the story, and I hope you update real soon.

It's getting really good so far, and I can't what to see what happens next in the story. Also I can't believe that spirit made Sid do that I was like "Noooooooooooooooo". You're doing a really good job on this story, and I hope you keep doing what you like doing.

This chapter was really good, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story it's getting very intresting. I'm so glad that Seth and Tony are friends again; then with Kim cutting her hand, then the whole Quil thing with Claire, and now poor Embry hurting Sam that was so sad. I was like "noo" when I read the parts where everything bad things happening to the LaPush gang. I hope they find out who ever the evil spirit is that they send that sorry son of a bitch to hell!

I have to admit i hate twilight, but i love your stories. I had come back to reread, and lo and behold! You have started a brand new fic! This is great! So Victoria must be back and now she's playing mind games huh? I can't wait to read more!

Small but i noticed a few typos (i NEVER nag on typos as I am the reigning Queen of Typos, but you seem to like your work precise *which is why i love reading your work!*), the only one i can think of right off hand is the 'boo's' for booze.

Please don't take that as any sort of criticism because I think you are wonderful and your writing impressive!! <33

This was so cute, and I loved how you put Tony's thought into the story in that way. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. I hope you update soon, and keep up the work.