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Ok so I've got to tell you, I'm relatively new to adult fanfic/fanfic and had no intention of registering, signing up etc. (just wanted to enjoy the imagination of others).

Anyway, I stumbled upon "Prelude" one rainy day and honestly didn't leave my computer until I had seen it to the end - your writing is so unbelievably close to Meyers, with each characters actions, thoughts and emotions so close to the books, that I truly believed you to be her and playing some fanciful joke on us...(still kind of believe this, not gonna lie!) I then went on to bookmark you on my browser so that every so often I could check back to your page and see if any new treasures had been posted.

Well, oh lucky day, "Newborn" comes along and the way in which you write from Edward's perspective is so spot on that it actually gets me emotionally involved and, dare I say it, attached! Believe me, I find it hard to be emotionally touched by real life never mind stories (cynic!) but you seem to get to me every time!

And finally, after falling head over heels in love with "Polar Night" from the word go, I decided that there is no other thing for it... If I had to register on this site in order to convey the wholehearted adoration I have of your stories then so be it. So here I am, declaring my love!! Your delivery of Edward and Bella's wedding night on Isle Esme was executed so beautifully, not too smutty that it made me cringe but enough heat for it to be satisfiable - exactly as I pictured it would be. I pretty much only looked to adult fanfiction to appease a need to see how Edward would make love to Bella if the Twilight Saga had been aimed for adults rather than teens. Therefore, just an extension of his tender love for her NOT a seriously dirty alter reality and you capture it wonderfully with some extra bits that really add to the story (especially love their experiments in "Prelude")! And well done you for doing the wedding night from Edward's point of view as I personally think it would be much harder than from Bella's, you really captured his turmoil and pleasure simultaneously, so impressive!

So there you go, I just wanted you to know that if ever your feeling like your not receiving enough feedback for your exquisite stories and maybe you don't want to put them up on here anymore, then here I am telling you that nothing else but brilliance would have had me making the effort of registering with the sole aim to review. Honestly, I'm in my final year of university and really should be concentrating on my work! Thank you for making the very few hours a week I have to myself that bit more enjoyable.

Fizzle
p.s. desperately would like to see an update to "Newborn", I'm on tenterhooks here!
p.p.s. I reckon you would have many many more reviews if people didn't need to be registered in order to leave one.

Amazing. Thank you! And he's such an IDIOT! I can empathize with Bella, to some degree, because I once had a boyfriend who refused me anything physical for three months, and I know that's really horrible. But with the even stronger bond between mates... no way. Absolutely no way. I cannot wait for how you'll portray the night of Bella's "attack" on Edward *grins*

Ah, this chapter was so beautiful! Edward's thoughts, his fears and his love, all just shine through! I hope he'll listen to Carlisle (and Bella!) and not make them miserable as he deals with his personal demons. It makes for great reading, though! Another flawless chapter, and a pure joy to read.

I expected something spectacular for the wedding night scene. And you didn't deliver. It was BEYOND spectacular! Truly and simply amazing and moving and beautiful. Your portrayal of Edward's emotions - his fears, his hopes, his passion - all of it, was truly flawless!

Seriously... how do you do it? How do you come up with chapter after chapter, idea after idea that is both mesmerizingly perfect and wonderfully accurate? Where do you get your inspiration? I don't think I've ever read other fanfiction that was this beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing your stories and your creativity... I love reading your work and there's not one single story so far that's left me wanting anything but the next update ;)

Take a bunch of freshly made (christmas) cookies and please continue your amazing work... I'm forever and entirely devoted to you!

My ONLY complaint with this update is that it ended TOO SOON! Edward's thoughts are both believable and eloquent. Lovely. And Bella's reflections are just as flawless. Can't WAIT (hint, hint!) for the next chapter!

OMG BELLA!!!!! I AM A VAMPIRE IRL AND I WOULD TOTALLY BONE HER IF SHE WERE REAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hooray! If there wasn't an update tomorrow, I was prepared to beg shamelessly and promise vast amounts of chocolate. I got this big grin when I saw you had updated. And WHAT an update! Absolutely perfect. Edward's thoughts are, as always, perfectly in character. Beautifully and flawlessly done yet again!

I knew it was going to be a good day when I saw this was updated. And this chapter is my favorite so far, and that's saying quite a bit! I especially loved the conversation between Edward and Jasper. I really wish we could have seen more interaction between Edward and his brothers in the books. Thank goodness fan fic can fufill that need! Anyway, your writing is flawless and beautiful as always. This story truly is a joy.

This post was even better than I anticipated, and my expectations were quite high indeed!