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May 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!
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October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting....
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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i like it and would read if you did more
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omggg, you must continue this! Love it. By the way... It's 'ciao', not 'chow' (:
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing! update asap please.
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK - I have to say - WOW!~ At first I was in shock that you killed off Alice and Edward. But the Alec, Demetri & Bella angle - I LOVE! I can hardly wait to read more! The last chapter - the one with Carlisle - was hard to read. Their anguish and torture as their family is wrenched apart was so hard to read. And yet, the feelings expressed are to me closer to what probably would have happened. Edward, as much as I liked him, was a bit of an idiot.
So, please - go on more with the 20-something Alec, Demetri & Bella - loving it!
So, please - go on more with the 20-something Alec, Demetri & Bella - loving it!
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're asking if you did a good enough job with this chapter... Well, I'm sitting here crying like a little girl, is that enough of an answer for you...?
Amazing, and yet so very very sad... please update soon!
Amazing, and yet so very very sad... please update soon!
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February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I’ve recently read this wonderful story over at fanfiction.net and I absolutely fell in love story, so now I’ll also review it over here, sorry if it’s the same review, with a few modifications, but I’m a little lazy!
I absolutely love and adore this story of yours, it’s so good! The plot’s awesome and the character portrayal and character interaction are too, of course! I really enjoy all of the different point of views, amazing to be honest (I really liked Bella’s, I absolutely loved Alec’s and I adored Demetri’s as well!). I’d love to see what Jane thinks of Bella and all of this, maybe you could write a chapter from her p.o.v. just a thought?! Everything’s also extremely well written, very beautiful indeed!
More so, I love the fact that this is a slightly dark story, I love darker fics, and that Alec’s an incubus, which makes him even more sexier, if possible, lol, but not too dark, obviously, hehe! Anyway, I really enjoyed the pace of their relationship (Bella/Alec) it’s not rushed and seems very realistic, I also really liked Bella/Demetri’s friendship, so sweet, I’m, glad that she has found at least a friend in the castle!
Now about Felix, he’s absolutely vile, I don’t care for him at all, I hope that Alec, with Demetri’s help will be able to protect Bella from him (Felix), that is?! Aro really isn’t much better, okay, so he doesn’t want anything to happen to her, but he blackmailed her into all of this and was the real cause of her loss and grief, in my eyes, at least!
Now I cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…
I absolutely love and adore this story of yours, it’s so good! The plot’s awesome and the character portrayal and character interaction are too, of course! I really enjoy all of the different point of views, amazing to be honest (I really liked Bella’s, I absolutely loved Alec’s and I adored Demetri’s as well!). I’d love to see what Jane thinks of Bella and all of this, maybe you could write a chapter from her p.o.v. just a thought?! Everything’s also extremely well written, very beautiful indeed!
More so, I love the fact that this is a slightly dark story, I love darker fics, and that Alec’s an incubus, which makes him even more sexier, if possible, lol, but not too dark, obviously, hehe! Anyway, I really enjoyed the pace of their relationship (Bella/Alec) it’s not rushed and seems very realistic, I also really liked Bella/Demetri’s friendship, so sweet, I’m, glad that she has found at least a friend in the castle!
Now about Felix, he’s absolutely vile, I don’t care for him at all, I hope that Alec, with Demetri’s help will be able to protect Bella from him (Felix), that is?! Aro really isn’t much better, okay, so he doesn’t want anything to happen to her, but he blackmailed her into all of this and was the real cause of her loss and grief, in my eyes, at least!
Now I cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…
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February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I just joined the site and I couldn't stop reading this story and my anticipation for more is overwhelming! Good job!
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story so far