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by christineyoung

schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this is so getting good. I'm loving it and can't wait to hear from Demetri or see what Carlisle has to say about his son and daughter's death and his adopted human daughters condition. Please hurry.

schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmm had read your other story, and was intrigued to read this one. i like it keep it up for sure
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's so rare to see a mind control story on here! Your my hero!!!!!
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good and has TONS of potential! great work!
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I still think Demetri will turn on the Volturi and help Bella escape the story is just heading that way. It could be Alec helps her himself he seems to be melting around Bella. A chapter from Alec's point of View would help and maybe even from Demetri's point of view how they feel about everything that's happened. Its going so good I can't wait for the next chapter installment.

Happy New Year to you too!!!!
schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update this soon. I like where it's going!
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is going so different from what I thought it would. Could it be that Demetri has a change of heart and takes Bella as his own or helps her get back to the Cullens oh please hurry and up date I am now 'dying'to know what happens.

schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it's getting even more complicated! But I like it! I can't wait to see how you'll resolve this situation. Unique idea and wonderful execution.
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a true Edward fan, so this was hard for me to read. BUT, it's so well written that I couldn't help myself. I can't wait to see where you go with this. And Alec here is yummy!
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore this!!! Finally an Alec fic!
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