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I am very anxious to see where your story is heading. I am hoping to see more chapters up soon :) Loving the story so far!

~Angel~

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I'm really enjoying this :) Very nice.

This is wonderful. But I wonder how you'll end it? Who will she end up with? I have my thoughts, but you could surprise us! And probably will. Beautiful!

The scene with Edward was very well done. I could see it happening that way. It was very possible. I love the story line you're creating here. I can't wait for the next post.

Oh I love what you're doing here! I can't wait for more. The relationship between Bella and Jake seems very natural and real. Lovely work.