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June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great!!! Please keep writing!
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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More! Very hot, I hope to see an update soon!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it! i'm glad someone had the guts to do a darker side of edward. since there obviously is one. i think you may have gone a tiny bit too violent with his thoughts though. i think if he went so far as to hurt her he would be sorry in his mind no thinking good. even if he was too angry to give her any comfort by saying so.
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my oh my oh my! more more more! this is so exciting! Edward is SO FURIOUS! oooh...Bella, Bella, who couldnt' want him? he's hot when he's angry. Please submit chapter 7 soon!
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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please finish soon, I have to know how this ends. HURRY :)
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really hoping you'll update soon. This is great!
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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Best Bella/Jacob I've ever read! (so far; haven't finished this fic yet). The Jacob/Bella scenes you describe so well. So hot! mmm!
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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, Edward is kind of scaring me. Still excited, though! woo! This is actually more interesting than 'romantic' Edward. Edward is always so damn so-called 'romantic' in other fics. Nice to see him different for once. I look forward to more chapter(s)!
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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kinda like angry Edward! :)
Keep writing....
Keep writing....
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December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mmm, finally some good Bella/Jacob!
MUST WRITE MORE. And I will go read chapter 3...
MUST WRITE MORE. And I will go read chapter 3...