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fusedtwilight,
Ok, so I just registered as a member here. I've been reading you're stories straight through for the last week and I just had to review. I still have yet to read Kin and Kindred but I am very excited about it. If it is half as good as your other stories then I'm positive that I will enjoy it. I love how you tie almost all of your fics together. You're a wonderful writer and I can't wait to read more. Keep it coming! ^_^

~Creeptacular1386~

OMG
i think that is the best chapter i have ever read
i almost cried
update soon please im dying

While I've not read Eye of the Beholder I am liking this one very much. I hate to even critize anything about this cause you are doing an absolute wonderful job but I might suggest putting IM's between characters in italics that way when you write how the character is feeling at that moment you don't get lost. Please, please don't get mad at me for that I thought it might make it easier for readers to make a transition. I've had the same problem off and on with a story I'm writing dealing with dream world (my own little world some friends and I made up). Please hurry with the next installment and I'm going to read Eye of the Beholder. :)

I love this I can't wait for the next installment